grammar help

[hallow juniper]

Hello guys can you help on this sentence I made?

Die beste Rache ist, einem Platz zu erringern, der Sie nicht mehr über Rache sorgen.

the best revenge is getting yourself to a place where you no longer care about revenge.

Aber ich weiß schon, dass meine übersetzung falsch ist. Ich möchte wissen, wie ich diese satze besser grammatikalish formulieren. (Ohne deepl)

I also want to know what grammar point did i used wrong.

[safe patrol]

"Die beste Rache ist, ..." is rather incomplete. You'd either have to put in an "es", or rephrase "Die beste Rache besteht darin, ..." erringern doesn't exist. "erringen" does exist, but it requires Akkusativ, not Dativ. It's also not a verb I'd use in the context. The relative pronoun can't be in Nominativ, since your relative clause has a subject, "Sie". Apart from the various grammar issues, the sentence is quite unidiomatic. I just sent your English sentence through deepl, and its translation was both correct and idiomatic. 🤷

[hallow juniper]

Thank you. But if i use deepl, i will never learn my mistakes and will be get used on just using it, that's why i opt not to use the app 😞

[safe patrol]

I understand. But you do realize, don't you, that your original sentence would be quite challenging, even for a really advanced speaker? I.e. I wonder how much you really learnt from the wall of text where I tried to point out the mistakes. :)

There is really a lot to be said for using what you know, and then gradually progressing towards more complicated sentences - I speak from my own experience as a language learner here.

[hallow juniper]

Yes, i learned in school that there are english sentences that is hard to impossible to be translated exactly as it is. That's why i am trying to learn. I, too, found this sentence hard, I did used the deepl after trying to translate the sentence by myself and it turned out really far from what I made that's why I wanna know my mistakes were.

[safe patrol]

Unfortunately, deepl doesn't support the language I'm learning. So, what I do is: I try to simplify what I want to say until I'm fairly sure I can make myself understood in my target language. Then, I put an English version of my text through google translate, and check their translation. If it's too far from my own, I try to simplify further. And then, the result usually makes me slap my head, because I overlooked something fundamental, like the correct conjugation of the verb or something. 🤷

[ebon garnet]

die Übersetzung, die ich erhalten habe, lautet: Die beste Rache ist es, sich selbst an einen Punkt zu bringen, an dem man nicht mehr an Rache denkt.
Wäre das richtig und idiomatische?