#2d-graphics

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heavy iron
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It's part of a series, Like when you finish X game you go to the next.

shrewd frigate
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they fr worked smarter not harder and still have a good playerbase across all of them

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the quality of the icons doesn’t matter that much in this case

gentle ore
gentle ore
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the ai and jumpscares are also very mediocre and depends more on the surprise rather than the actual "scariness"

shrewd frigate
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i mean, how much effort do you need to put in a game to attract kids

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most of the time not much

sacred sphinx
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funny thing is that they all suck

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i think they copied the uhh

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miners game or something

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i forgot the name

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they copy the whole PS1 style aswell

shrewd frigate
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also im pretty surprised they're all from different studios

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they look like they'd fit under one

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judging from the icons alone

scenic grove
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Easy bag

shrewd frigate
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fr

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he's got a picrew but for game icons

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i dont like the artstyle but still, the artist's getting the bag at the end of the day

heavy iron
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Nope, I checked, Zwfty Studios.

heavy iron
sacred sphinx
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how 😭😭

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i definitely thought they were by the same people

shrewd frigate
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oh

shrewd frigate
heavy iron
sacred sphinx
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oh

shrewd frigate
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makes sense

eager crane
earnest horizon
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So fast

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How much u getting paid for this one? 21.4 mil Somalian shillings?

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66 dabloons?

eager crane
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dabllons?

earnest horizon
velvet pawn
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who can make texture like this?

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i can pay robuxes for it

unborn meteor
scenic grove
unborn meteor
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make me

scenic grove
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If not them don't do em

snow aurora
thick ginkgo
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What are the specific poses are you looking for? And which muscles are you looking for?

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Or just in what area?

eager crane
gentle ore
earnest horizon
scenic grove
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Can u draw a muscular bull dog? :)

eager crane
cursive mauve
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is it possible to make this image transparent

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i need it for a gui effect but its overlapping eachother

earnest horizon
eager crane
cobalt nacelle
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lel

earnest horizon
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Kinemaster moment

open raft
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what game?

cobalt nacelle
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shut

still bramble
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pls buy me

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lol

still bramble
open raft
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ass prize

earnest horizon
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What is pls buy me 💀

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Why they trying to revive slavery 💀

sacred sphinx
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pls buy me??? 😭😭

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wait nah why did i say that it sounds so bad out of context

still bramble
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it’s a donation game lol

atomic girder
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Very bad

still bramble
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not how it works lol

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you buy people’s cards and resell bc at the same time it’s value goes up

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it’s kinda hard to explain but the thumbnail is the main part I’m talking about it

royal hearth
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anyone making an anime game if so can i help

atomic girder
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💪 hope all goes well with the contest seems like a neat opportunity

cobalt nacelle
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why are you advertising it

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your not supposed to advertise

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thats a ban

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right there

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you cant advertise here

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im reporting

still bramble
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what an op

cobalt nacelle
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lol

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well u are

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stop advertising

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bruh

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yes

still bramble
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ok man didn’t know it’s that personal

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💀

cobalt nacelle
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its goofy

royal hearth
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im making a one piece game gonna be called star piece
ill pay when the game is release bc i am broke

tardy aurora
tardy aurora
cursive mauve
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and then spend 100 hours figuring out how to use photoshop

atomic girder
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I would just change the blending mode when using or try to find something similar that is actually transparent

scenic grove
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took me a week or so to understand photopea which is even easier than ps

atomic girder
atomic girder
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Mhm

atomic girder
scenic grove
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shading taking ages

radiant prism
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I’ve Alr posted this here but how would y’all price it?

earnest horizon
radiant prism
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Borderline scam on my part

strange kite
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Probably could get maybe 10k

radiant prism
strange kite
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It does look like you've got some work ahead

earnest horizon
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Yeah true

strange kite
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But 10k should be possible

radiant prism
strange kite
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Your effects are really cool

radiant prism
sleek pumice
tight raven
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me when

eager crane
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I’m finna get a hand tat someone make something for me

eager crane
severe remnant
sleek pumice
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A little pet concept I sketched out lol (I’ll most likely finish this digitally soon) trollsus

open raft
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ignoref That message that just got deleted

severe remnant
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Doing weapons is a nice break for all the anatomy gesture drawing

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Nice change of pace

open raft
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"nice change of pace "
proceeds to draw 3 hands ,

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trulfyt SOmethin a 🐐 would Do

severe remnant
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I mean... cathello u have a point

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Lmao

dark scroll
severe remnant
sleek pumice
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Can someone give me there opinion on this graphic design

atomic girder
# sleek pumice Can someone give me there opinion on this graphic design

Honestly, the logo (I'm assuming it's a logo) is visually busy due to the different boldness you have for the elements and the way you chose to assemble them. I think it could be simplified further by reducing the overall number of elements. The two bolder stars on either side stand out the most, and if it were me I would decrease their boldness, make them smaller, or remove them altogether. I would also experiment with different font choices to see what works best. The colours selected work well together and are not visually displeasing (good thing). Overall, I think the logo has potential, but it needs some refinement.

lyric shale
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sup 2d

atomic girder
lyric shale
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get this bbg

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that way when you suspect your friend has dementia you can show him your hand

spark hedge
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💀

shrewd frigate
sleek pumice
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same gfxcomet idea, but i did It on mobile

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rate it

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and i know the quality isnt so good

atomic girder
sleek pumice
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thx

atomic girder
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Theirs has way more depth and detail than yours, which is something you could incorporate or learn to incorporate in the future

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No problem

atomic girder
rain silo
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never in my life did i thought that someone will make a game based on chairs

scenic grove
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Also a very good tip: don't use a black backplate

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I think fallen or hafoldun told me that once

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Logos without a black backplate look good :D

severe remnant
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Always.

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Black backgrounds are a no in feneral. Use slightly tinted black backgrounds with some sort of saturation to a harmonic color for the logo

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Will make it pop more and look better + look like it's part of the background and give it consistency

lyric shale
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looks way better man

scenic grove
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Yeah

sleek pumice
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dw

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@sleek pumice check DMs

slow flare
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how to get commissons

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so fast

noble knoll
slow flare
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portfolio

noble knoll
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wherw

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where

slow flare
slow flare
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getting comission

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got only 3 comissions

deep wave
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Top g frl frl

weak lantern
torpid ocean
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hello td graphics

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im back

quiet falcon
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Who likes these

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I’m still learning

atomic girder
# quiet falcon I’m still learning

These would fit way better in #3d-graphics .

Based on the quality of the character render I’m assuming you used roblox studio alone and no external programs like blender. I suggest you gravitate to a program such as blender in order to produce better quality renders play around with the lighting and make more dynamic poses. The shadow on the render is also pretty harsh I would tone it down in terms of decreasing the opacity and moving it closer to the character. Good job so far keep playing around with things and soon you will be moving onto actual scenes.

quiet falcon
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Idk how to use blender-

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I was just wanting to make a few cheap ones for people let’s say like 150 robux each just to get a bit robux for my group

snow aurora
atomic girder
atomic girder
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I personally wouldn’t pay 150 robux for it considering this is pretty easy to achieve by yourself in a few minutes

noble knoll
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@somber gulch helper when

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🥺

shrewd frigate
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you pinged the wrong business trollskull

atomic girder
atomic girder
# quiet falcon Rude-

I’m not being rude I’m being honest and that’s how giving good critiques work. This channel is meant for help we aren’t here to baby you we will tell you how it is.

quiet falcon
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Doesn’t seem that hard ig

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So basically get a character from roblox save the characters model we’ll export then you select the accessories and export them on its own go to the paint rig and yea

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Then get lighting make it look good

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It will take time to learn but I will make it im a quick learner

noble knoll
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💀

atomic girder
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Your render can also look different depending on the render mode you choose and the specs of your device determines the sped in which it will render

noble knoll
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I get the gist of making a quick buck with how simple it is

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But this channel is for constructive criticism so get ready for all the breakdown of your work thrown at you

atomic girder
quiet falcon
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What’s scenes….

noble knoll
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Can’t handle deez critique

shrewd frigate
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not just that but there are people here who want you to improve

atomic girder
noble knoll
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I’m holding back a lot

atomic girder
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The mighty toelicker knows you all have potential

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I have the greatest amount of potential though

shrewd frigate
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just switching to blender will help a lot

noble knoll
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I used blender when I was like 12 from a random tutorial and I got some pretty great results

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Lost it tho 💀

shrewd frigate
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I can’t run blender well on my laptop

noble knoll
shrewd frigate
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it freezes every time I try to do something iwannagohaha

noble knoll
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My old laptop specs were pretty nice

shrewd frigate
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and im only rendering a single avatar with an hdri

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not even a whole scene

noble knoll
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Too bad it broke

shrewd frigate
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oop

noble knoll
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Well it was extremely dirty

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I think I saw mold there when I disassembled it once years ago

shrewd frigate
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wtf

noble knoll
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Could be that or just plain rust

atomic girder
sleek pumice
shrewd frigate
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I think you’d know the difference between mold and rust

noble knoll
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Yeah

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It’s defo mold

shrewd frigate
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not a gaming laptop either

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Intel graphics

noble knoll
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This shit gonna be fire

shrewd frigate
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so my cpu is running overtime while I’m in blender

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shit gets fried

noble knoll
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My CPU’s been hitting 100 all the time

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Apparently Roblox 3d view exhausts the CPU a lot

shrewd frigate
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graphics 10 isn’t even possible for me without lag

noble knoll
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The days when I had to set my graphics to 1 all the time when I got my first PC

shrewd frigate
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i will be investing in a desktop in the future so my predicament is not permanent

noble knoll
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It was an office one so trash specs

shrewd frigate
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yeah my laptop is basically an office one

snow aurora
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My computer can’t run roblox with out all apps closed or else itll power off

atomic girder
atomic girder
shrewd frigate
shrewd frigate
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so it relies on my cpu

atomic girder
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What kind of integrated graphics does your cpu have

shrewd frigate
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also im a college student i dont have the extra money to spend rn 💀

atomic girder
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Gpu isn’t necessary but its definitely helpful

shrewd frigate
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yeah

snow aurora
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I gotta check my computer 4+ years old cryingdead

atomic girder
severe remnant
quiet falcon
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@atomic girder

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I’m on making one

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Al send it in chat and u can tell me what you think

noble knoll
snow aurora
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OKAY cryingdead cryingdead

shrewd frigate
# noble knoll

honestly it’s warranted if you follow it up with great feedback

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some people need a wake up call

quiet falcon
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How does this look

quiet falcon
noble knoll
shrewd frigate
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the avatar looks a lot better than earlier

noble knoll
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Blender rigging does magic

quiet falcon
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I need a better background image

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One that I can make

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And then a good text font and stuf

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And it will be cool

shrewd frigate
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yee 👍

quiet falcon
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How much would you pay?

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I’d say 150

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Because the background and text could be better

shrewd frigate
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i am not good with pricing gfx, but usually I go by this principle: if i can make your work with a tutorial, then you shouldn’t sell at all until you improve more

atomic girder
# quiet falcon

You using a rig has really allowed you to step up as it looks much more smoother in terms of textures and posing. Lighting does need work though you can change the lighting post-editing in a program like photoshop just change the curves and levels and other stuff. Background does need work as well it seems like this is the only thing you’ve been sticking with which isn’t really a good thing. It makes all of your gfx’s so far fit together which may not be a good thing as you want your work to differ to better showcase your skills.

quiet falcon
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True

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I dunno how to make good GFX backgrounds

atomic girder
atomic girder
atomic girder
quiet falcon
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Think I’m gonna add a glow to the outer layer

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Make it glossy

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Then make a better background

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See if it comes together

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I will check back in

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Once it’s done

atomic girder
silent shell
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how can i make the overlay more transparent

atomic girder
# quiet falcon Make it glossy

Glossy isn’t always good as it could possibly make your final product look like plastic. And considering what you’re going for it may not be a good look.

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Better background is definitely needed though

snow aurora
silent shell
atomic girder
snow aurora
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Erm idk how to use paint net WHYYYYY

atomic girder
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It will bring up later properties

noble knoll
atomic girder
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At the bottom of the layer properties window is opacity

silent shell
noble knoll
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The channel misuse is strong on this one

snow aurora
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Business man is indeed businessy

atomic girder
noble knoll
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Move to 3d channel if yall gonna continue with the blender gfx thing

atomic girder
silent shell
quiet falcon
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What should I use for good fonts

atomic girder
quiet falcon
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I wanna make something a little like this

noble knoll
quiet falcon
atomic girder
atomic girder
quiet falcon
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Something like that for the text

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Then find a better background image

atomic girder
# quiet falcon

To achieve something like that you also need to use the pen tool, a variety of blending options, and vectors

shrewd frigate
quiet falcon
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No as a 2d image

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So not with blender

atomic girder
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You also need some experience doing something similar so it’s recommended to watch a tutorial that will teach you to do something like that

atomic girder
quiet falcon
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Is photopea good?

atomic girder
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I’m not talking in regards to blender that would make things complicated for no reason

shrewd frigate
quiet falcon
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Yea ik it would

atomic girder
fair otter
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Group Icon

snow aurora
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I like it

vale hawk
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heya i need help asap so when i make border 7 pixels from modify and when i color it the color goes over the selection whys that

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my brush is hard brush and like everything is normal ig

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like everything i do it goes out of the selection a bit

noble knoll
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Can you clean them up

quiet falcon
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Finished making the text

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@atomic girder

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What do you think?

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@noble knoll is it good?

quiet falcon
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Right

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How does that look?

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The background still looks iffy

atomic girder
# quiet falcon

Honestly compared to what you had before it looks really nice I would if worked a bit on the gradient though

quiet falcon
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Hang on so I have this for the main logo

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That can be the group logo then I’m gonna make some renders for the game logos

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But I don’t know how to get like the female body

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In blended

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Blender or the male one

atomic girder
# quiet falcon

Lighting doesn’t match the background you could still edit the lighting in photopea just clip a curve and levels to the render and other adjustments you might find helpful

atomic girder
atomic girder
severe remnant
# shrewd frigate some people need a wake up call

Problem is when u give rough feedback some people just doesn't take feedback instead they decide.

Wow. I think. I'm right and I do it perfectly, and just don't take responsibility for jothing.

And/or get mad and start insulting u cuz their triggered u spoke facts about their work

severe remnant
shrewd frigate
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any work that is posted in the dev channels is fair game

atomic girder
shrewd frigate
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even then if your work isn't outstandingly good you'll only get a few stars iwannagohaha

dusty saffron
shrewd frigate
severe remnant
shrewd frigate
severe remnant
shrewd frigate
severe remnant
shrewd frigate
severe remnant
shrewd frigate
severe remnant
shrewd frigate
regal ember
shrewd frigate
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long time no talk dude

shrewd frigate
regal ember
regal ember
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how u been

shrewd frigate
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i went inactive for several months to focus on college so i've slowed down a lot on making clothes

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good to see that you're still around

fair otter
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  • i like the result of how it looks
cold sapphire
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Rate my qst gfx pwease 🥺

regal ember
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life is just busy

sleek pumice
sleek pumice
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work in progress

gaunt haven
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What to draw for creating a design that illustrates the elements of art; color, form/shape, line, space, texture, and value? I need one for each element...

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GUYS

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Help

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Art class is almost over bro

stone agate
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Hey plp wsg i am new here

gaunt haven
stone agate
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?

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Whag happened

stone agate
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Damn idk man sorry

gaunt haven
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@worn bobcat ban for not helping me

gaunt haven
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But bro

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Help

gaunt haven
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I need some for each thing

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Jelly fish ain gon cover it

snow aurora
cobalt nacelle
cold sapphire
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Bro expected me not to

gaunt haven
cold sapphire
gaunt haven
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I wanna kill this stupid green jelly bean

snow aurora
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HOW DO U GET MEBER

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NVM I GOT EM

earnest horizon
placid marsh
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Hey there!!
How's ya doing mate?

earnest horizon
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wbu my good sir?

placid marsh
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Lol

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Im good

earnest horizon
placid marsh
lyric shale
placid marsh
open raft
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fake

open raft
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fake

sleek pumice
sleek pumice
sleek pumice
violet forge
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There's a lot of fems in 2d, for sure.

cobalt nacelle
cobalt nacelle
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yea they are mostly the pro drawers honestly

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but im learning

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from my... sister lol

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shes also a female

snow aurora
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IM PROOO

violet forge
noble knoll
sleek pumice
snow aurora
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this took too long cryingdead

severe remnant
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That's all I can do for free

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Take it or leave it

noble knoll
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Don’t hire here

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Brokeass

opaque coral
opaque coral
noble knoll
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“i need someone to make me a free logo”

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Service isn’t free yk

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Work for some money in your field if you want to commission someone

opaque coral
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Shut up

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You’re a discord mod

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Relax

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And I ac do commission for free

noble knoll
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Anyhow

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Just because you do it free doesn’t mean that others are gonna do the same

lyric shale
sleek pumice
chrome cipher
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ok

fringe apex
frank minnow
strange kite
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No!

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Oh wait

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you were not talking about the logo

sleek pumice
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dm me if u would like to make a game with me or if you can teach me vfx

sleek pumice
# frank minnow rate

i like it but the gradient on the text outline , ("orange,red") dont make sense being that color

frank minnow
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i didnt know what other color to put

quartz warren
slow flare
frank minnow
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how did you make that buildign?

upbeat sonnet
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Feedback is appreciated Pls

cold sapphire
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im facing a problem where my effect somehow pauses when my render is visible

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this is without render (i want this)

cold sapphire
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and this is without (the problem)

upbeat sonnet
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thought you were talking about 3D gfx when you mention render lol

cold sapphire
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my layersd

upbeat sonnet
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try flattening

cold sapphire
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how do i do that .-. its my 2nd day on photoshop

upbeat sonnet
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put all them in a single folder

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then right click it

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you should see "flatten image"

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or smth

cold sapphire
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kk

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works ty

upbeat sonnet
lyric shale
upbeat sonnet
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yeah it's intentional

golden notch
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Flabbergasted

upbeat sonnet
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it's how eyes are like that. (when the noob is in shock)

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not sure if I'm doing it right.

lyric shale
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the weird grey pieces

upbeat sonnet
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yeah I'm exactly referring to that.

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it's all intentional

lyric shale
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why is it intentional? lol

upbeat sonnet
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because I used a reference for they

lyric shale
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it just looks weird and messy

upbeat sonnet
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that*

upbeat sonnet
lyric shale
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can i see the ref u used??

upbeat sonnet
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sure, lemme get one quick

lyric shale
upbeat sonnet
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Got it! thanks

lyric shale
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the gasping noob one is actually really good in terms of contrast. both are actually. you did a real good job with the colours dude

verbal hedge
lyric shale
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id suggest playing around with the background on the noob one though because you could probably make it a bit more interesting. it would be fine without though

upbeat sonnet
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that's the main point I guess.

lyric shale
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yeah u did a good job with that

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brown is jus not a very pleasing colour tbh

upbeat sonnet
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Was planning to use it in my Twitter tweet for people to interact, basically entertainment pretty much.

strange kite
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Hi guys

upbeat sonnet
upbeat sonnet
warped terrace
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I recommend, with your style, to not use lineart at all expect for areas with deep shading. I also recommend to never use complete white unless you’re doing highlights in the eyes.

severe remnant
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The art would fall apart if it's removed

noble knoll
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Just research on color harmony and coloring style such as vivid, pastel, desaturated etc @upbeat sonnet

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I actually saw a physical pocket book about color harmony in the bookstore

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Might buy it to share some of the palletes since it got pallates for the moods you wanna display

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Seems pretty useful

upbeat sonnet
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Interesting! I might check out the physical book

noble knoll
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It's this one here

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The contents inside are pretty fleshed out from what I saw when I was checking it out there

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Pretty great with how it's pocket too

severe remnant
# noble knoll

Isn't it easier to study color theory urself and make harmonies

severe remnant
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Than have a book with 1.5k harmonies which u will use twice and the rest u'll be to lazy to look

noble knoll
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It's handy to bring a little pocket guide which gives out palletes for a specific style your going for sometimes yk

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Such as business

severe remnant
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Yeah but color theory already does that for u. If u study it u can make harmonies urself instead of copying from a book

noble knoll
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they go for very formal tones of grays and reds from what I saw when I flicked throught he pages there

noble knoll
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It's reference material for a reason

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Ofc you gotta learn it

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I'm not dismissing learning it in the first place

severe remnant
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Didn't say u were imma leave I feel the ambient is tense rn

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I wasn't saying nothing bout u. Sorry if u took it personal

noble knoll
severe remnant
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I wasn't discrediting ur artist knowledge

noble knoll
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My bad, I just had a rough day

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Lost too much money over a little misunderstanding

earnest horizon
summer crystal
warped terrace
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if he used a different color background and cleaned up the hand it would look so much better lol

summer crystal
noble knoll
summer crystal
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Sure did

scenic grove
fickle talon
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is it only me or this look goofy af

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this looks a lot better

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but idk why when color is added everything went wrong

earnest horizon
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Fr

earnest horizon
fickle talon
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i just did some change

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but idk which one is better

strange kite
strange kite
# noble knoll

It's also really interesting how this one includes the colors I was referring to 😉

noble knoll
upbeat sonnet
velvet fiber
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not really

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no normal person would do tht, if they do then theyre cheap

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watermark discourages

shrewd frigate
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what could you possibly do with a noob reacting to a tv

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it has limited use cases

velvet fiber
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maybe, but theres a chance it can be used in game as a poster painting etc

shrewd frigate
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yeah

velvet fiber
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i had this happen to me

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it doent contribute much to the game, but still uncool tht they used my work

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without asking

fickle talon
strange kite
upbeat sonnet
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I only put it for honest people to see and appreciate my work, in case some people just want to share

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it's about being professional and trust

velvet fiber
upbeat sonnet
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why would I care about someone stealing my work?

strange kite
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My bad

velvet fiber
strange kite
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Honestly, you'd be really ass if steal someone's work

upbeat sonnet
velvet fiber
upbeat sonnet
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exactly

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Why would I waste my time? I would better be making my own money and minding my own businesses.

strange kite
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Someone who's going arround stealing assets isn't going to have a popular game

summer crystal
strange kite
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It's not cool

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I could remove.. any watermark

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But it's wierd

upbeat sonnet
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Yeah exactly, respect our works, don't try telling us "LOOOK I REMOVED WATERMARK OMG"

velvet fiber
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to discourage

upbeat sonnet
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I just stated the reason lol

fickle talon
upbeat sonnet
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read my previous messages

summer crystal
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Your watermark is ineffective and looks bad, I’m suggesting you use a better one

velvet fiber
# fickle talon wdym

if u can colour the black lines into a darker shade of each colour, maybe itll look cool

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so a blackline around the red flame colour, u colour it dark red

fickle talon
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okay i try try

upbeat sonnet
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Professionalism > crying about your works getting stolen

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just be mature and move on.

summer crystal
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Sorry for hurting your feelings

crystal pawn
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also poin

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aint it coms?

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then its the buyers problem

upbeat sonnet
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exactly bro

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it's their responsibility

crystal pawn
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and who tf would want to steal a custom drawing

upbeat sonnet
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yeah

crystal pawn
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crazy

upbeat sonnet
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only if you're really jealous + poor lol

crystal pawn
upbeat sonnet
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I mean, I get paid to do work not protect work

crystal pawn
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exactly

upbeat sonnet
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it's money bro, we all love it.

strange kite
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Agreed 👍

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Do you still do the character anatomy sketches?

velvet fiber
# summer crystal Sorry for hurting your feelings

adding security cameras doesnt stop a robber from goin into ur house, but adding it will discourage any potential robber. plus watermarks can be used to find the creator incase someone stumbles upon a drawing on the internet and wants something like it.

strange kite
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That's actually the best explanation

fickle talon
velvet fiber
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yeee

strange kite
noble knoll
upbeat sonnet
velvet fiber
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it looks nice, tho for yellow

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try to go for dark orange colour

fickle talon
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k

velvet fiber
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but i like it

strange kite
fickle talon
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tho u guys know how to switch from RGB colour picking to HSV

strange kite
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Don't let anyone discourage you, your becoming really good

velvet fiber
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nop

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better

upbeat sonnet
# crystal pawn exactly

and PLUS: How are you going to use works? I mean without watermark (if I were to provide). If you use any work in any public place, they WILL be stolen. Just like game icons.

velvet fiber
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u missed a black line inside

strange kite
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Rgb looks fine

upbeat sonnet
fickle talon
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i mean

upbeat sonnet
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❤️

fickle talon
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HSV value is easier to control

velvet fiber
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i never tried hsv

crystal pawn
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@upbeat sonnet i like your style, its kinda diffrent and rough, not like totally perfect

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tbh its better than the ones that almost track the whole drawin'

upbeat sonnet
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Are you talking mostly about lines (that one that doesn't look rough) or..?

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tell me what is kinda different, so I can improve

crystal pawn
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no

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its a good diffrent

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dont change it

slow flare
sleek pumice
earnest horizon
crystal pawn
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it is dyno

tropic cloud
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looks like dynos logo flipped

wicked pike
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do you make your faces with pen tool

scenic grove
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Now that I am better with logos I can finally tell u what to improve

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Shade ur 3D man

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Also do u make ur vectors?

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Dis my latest logo

drowsy briar
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hey

sleek pumice
wicked pike
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oh

drowsy briar
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yes

wicked pike
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no'

tardy aurora
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well

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to have designed one

sacred sphinx
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i loooveee gambling

sacred sphinx
# upbeat sonnet Feedback is appreciated <:Pls:888470351883956246>

the arm is very off and it looks like he is pushing it back and the torso is very wide

i dont understand the shadow at all but maybe that's just me cuz it suddenly cuts off and there's one coming out of nowhere.... but I'm not too sure because i still have to study more lightning

and the TV should be looking more to the noob becuz on that perspective it doesn't look like its directly facing to him

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but something i can recommend you is recreating the scenario on studio, to get an understanding of the perspective and angle and use it as a reference for drawing

lyric shale
summer crystal
sacred sphinx
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fr

atomic girder
wheat canyon
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Does anyone know a good pricing for pet renders like these listed?

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yo graphicman long time no see

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you improved a lot

sleek pumice
wheat canyon
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im not selling

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im giving examples

sleek pumice
wheat canyon
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i love to give clean examples, watermarks make customers blind

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as soon as this asset is used in a running game already its useless to watermark it

sleek pumice
atomic girder
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I would start at 1k if you are able to get commissions for that amount then you could choose to increase it if you don’t you can lower it

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Pricing is trial and error you gotta see what works

wheat canyon
atomic girder
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Like yk when you go to Costco and buy in bulk it’s cheaper than buying just one from a regular grocery store

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Do that to your work

wheat canyon
atomic girder
wheat canyon
atomic girder
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If you really want you could charge like 300-400 robux plus tax per render to make things easier

wheat canyon
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your name explains a lot of stuff

atomic girder
wheat canyon
atomic girder
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Oui

wheat canyon
atomic girder
wheat canyon
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Most gonna commission like 50 - 100 pet

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So bulk profit is always nice

atomic girder
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Yup

frosty osprey
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scrapped the logo at 50% completion but still looks decent so wanted to post

frosty osprey
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appreciate it

severe remnant
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:3 enjoy my twisted mind

green thunder
sacred sphinx
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what does that say

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elwina?

severe remnant
tight coral
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the big 3

earnest horizon
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I like it

tight coral
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thank you! :D

earnest horizon
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First one should just be bacon though

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The hair is hard to read

lyric shale
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i think i improved since 6 months ago yipee

earnest horizon
lyric shale
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i think the hand is off

severe remnant
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or maybe its cuz the perspective on the one with the ball is reversed

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the pinky side shouldnt be seen, the full hand shouldnt be visible

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so it looks like the wrist is broken

lyric shale
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but yeah it does look really weird

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if i were to hold a ball in that pose from that angle, my pinky would be visible

severe remnant
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take a pic

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that wrist bend is unnatural

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and it looks forced

severe remnant
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not the other 4 fingers

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most the hand would be on the other side

lyric shale
lyric shale
severe remnant
lyric shale
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dunno if this is better but hmm

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i think this is the pose i’m going for

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but the top view

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i kinda want her fingers to be spread out

severe remnant
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why not just make a single finger

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on the bottom

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we dont need to see the whole thing to understand its a hand

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the brain knows its a hand, just by seeing a single finger

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dont over complicate it

lyric shale
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and the model i’m referencing has it too

severe remnant
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the pinky is looking at the camera a bit if u look at it

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in ur drawing it isnt

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so im telling u the best solution to urs

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also this line makes it look like its gonna keep going to the background, but it turns and it looks weird with the perspective

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a single line can fuck up the pespective

lyric shale
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oooh thanks

severe remnant
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Also septics character has 4 fingers

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XD

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U made the same mistake.

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(for 4 fingers)

lyric shale
warped terrace
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Didn’t even cross my mind tbh 😭

severe remnant
warped terrace
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yeah whoops!!!

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I also don’t focus on fantasy characters anymore

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usually it’s just humans with different styles LMFAO

severe remnant
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U name it. All have human anatomy

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XD

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90% of current fantasy series and species are human like. Or have some sort of resemblance

thick ginkgo
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lol

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It applies to other animals aswell but they're more different but still uses the same base model for muscles

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And skeleton

pearl meteor
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hay can someone add face on my gfx

noble knoll
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No can do + the tax

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Counts as advertising

lyric shale
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anyone have an easier way to do this? 💀 or am i just gonna have to keep drawing it over and over from each different angle

shrewd frigate
sleek pumice
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Fr

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Not here buddu

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Buddy

velvet fiber
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unhelpful yet most helpful long term

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im thinkin of buyin spine 2d, i wanna master 2d tweening

upbeat sonnet
severe remnant
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Their a big animal that has a ton of similarities in it's muscular structure to most land animals

noble knoll
severe remnant
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If u wanna paint most 4 legged mammals horses are the biggest most buff animal to learn from

scenic grove
scenic grove
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@latent quail

1st off, it was a practise logo.

2nd off, brand logos are not cheap at all.

3rd off, 1k is not even a ton lmao, it is 3 fucking dollars so idk what ur talking abt.

upbeat sonnet
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Hey! I didn't forget about your feedback, I'm sorry that I did not reply back to you. Thank you for your valuable feedback 🙏

scenic grove
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wdym not perfectly put into each other 😭

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mark me the spot where it isnt perfectly put into each other

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what

strange kite
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It's hard to remember it aswell

scenic grove
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its a bat wing

strange kite
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Did you use the pen tool?

scenic grove
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bat man logo was made by a professional graphics designer lol

severe remnant
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Bat man logo already exists. I don't think it's that bad tbh

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Instead of saying it looks bad and being picky about. Angles. A proposition @sleek pumice I'd try giving constructive criticism

strange kite
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Don't use the pen tool of you don't know what your doing

scenic grove
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no?

river vigil
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🤔

strange kite
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I agree with Jug head

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You guys need to chill

severe remnant
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It's always the no graphic design roles that be giving the opinions

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Lol

scenic grove
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im js one that isnt specialized with with brand logos

severe remnant
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Y'all gotta chill with ur critics nobody here is profesional.

severe remnant
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Ur not rating shit. Ur just being rude and saying it looks trash. If it so good at it give something u would improve

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Not shit on the design

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Just give constructive critics

scenic grove
severe remnant
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I called him a bad designer

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I read it dw

scenic grove
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this shit is funny lmao

severe remnant
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.

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Wtf does that mean

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Badly proposed

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That's not even a word bro

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xd

scenic grove
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someone whit no experience or knowledge with brand logos shitting on me

severe remnant
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Proposing isn't a thing in logos

scenic grove
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pretty funny

severe remnant
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It's called disposition

river vigil
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this funny af

severe remnant
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Not proposition

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U moron

scenic grove
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💀

severe remnant
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Then stfu lmao

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Give better critics

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U seem good enough at English to shit on him

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Without giving any actual insight

scenic grove
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tf is this

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rdc

severe remnant
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No need thank u.

river vigil
scenic grove
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what does it have to do w anything

river vigil
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4 hours 💀

severe remnant
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Bro wants me to watch 4 hours.

river vigil
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yea lol

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no

severe remnant
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And..

scenic grove
severe remnant
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Exactly mam

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I ain't saying ur logo is amazing.

lyric shale
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yo i jus finished watching a 1 hour anatomy tutorial this shit slaps dude

river vigil
severe remnant
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But there's so many ways to say it

velvet fiber
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chat is alive

scenic grove
river vigil
scenic grove
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but it was my 3rd or 4th ever brand logo

velvet fiber
lyric shale
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for comics n animations n shit am i really gonna need a deep understanding of anatomy or is surface level okay

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learning every muscle seems like it would be tiring

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tf y’all arguing about

scenic grove
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shit

velvet fiber
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idk but its keepin this alive

river vigil
severe remnant
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... "bad proposition"

scenic grove
severe remnant
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Like blud wtf is that wording

lyric shale
severe remnant
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U trynna sound profesional and u said nothing

river vigil
graceful marlin
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guys

scenic grove
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both sides should be perfectly the same

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bc i literally copied one side and flipped it to the other

severe remnant
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Yeah but I don't see why he needed to draw red lines. I legit don't see a point in his critique cryingdead

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It's just saying stuff without having knowledge

graceful marlin
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idk is this gfx or not-
cryingdead

severe remnant
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My recommendation. Don't listen to anyone here without graphics role. Cuz most are trash that's why they don't have it

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Lmao

graceful marlin
scenic grove
velvet fiber
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well u dint draw the middle character so it cant be 2d, except for the bg

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but same can be said for 3d channel lol

graceful marlin
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but i think i need to make it smooth

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and better

velvet fiber
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public cant critique that well damn

severe remnant
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The thing is.

I gave ur critique trying to seem profesional when infact u had 0 clue what u were saying.

Instead of talking from a normal stand point u started talking about design as if u knew something. Which u clearly dont

vocal widget
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I dont even think thats gfx

velvet fiber
scenic grove
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cuz public only say what they think of it, ut graphic designers say how to make it better and what to do bc they have betetr knowledge w it

lyric shale
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it would look better if you were to parallel the curves (where i put the blue line) and it feels jagged and the curve is sudden (where i put the red line) try changing that up n see how it looks maybe

graceful marlin
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O

river vigil
velvet fiber
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cuz the glossy character

graceful marlin
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Is blender in phone tho?

velvet fiber
graceful marlin
lyric shale
river vigil