Mini Money Beat (pls be cool)

[runic wing]

I made it to have fun so pls be cool with me and give me some tips to improve myself ^^ (I am French so use simple English please)

drop timecode : 0.22 sec.

[mild anchor]

Is this supposed to be Jersey club? Either way, the drop definitely needs a bass. Also, the intro might need to be shortened and the drop also needs to be lengthened. Other than that, pretty good job so far.

[runic wing]

idk what its supposed to be bro XD but ty for the tips

[mild anchor]

No problem. One last thing: try looking up a typical Jersey club beat. Usually the kick usually goes
1 - - - 2 - - - followed by a tresillo, which is sort of a false triplet.

Numbers indicate kick placement. Much like:
1 - - - 2 - - - 3 - - 4 - - 5 -

[runic wing]

Is it better ?

[mild anchor]

Much better. All it needs is an 808 underneath that kick and you're good to go.

[runic wing]

ok

[runic wing]

u are good, ty for the tips

[mild anchor]

One last tip: the 808 needs a longer tail than that.