#Feedback for a new song

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sweet tusk
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I've planned this song for a really long time, but wasn't exactly sure how to do it. The main idea was to make a song that goes faster and faster 'till it plays millions of notes in every second (havent reached that point not even close) while it doesn't sounds trash. I'm planning to make this song overall 3-4x longer how long currently is.
I need feedback for the actualy part what's done, how to improve the sounds, the harmony, or change something etc. I would really appreciate every feedback ❤️‍🔥

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marsh tide
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It currently sounded like the intro of a Netflix show

hidden tusk
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getting that same vibe

keen cradle
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honestly such a vibe

sweet tusk
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so for the sounds, you guys doesnt hear anything wrong? @marsh tide @hidden tusk @keen cradle

west widget
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woah, the synth sounded like it was in the same room as me, that's hella cool

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it seems you're switching melody between a ton of different instruments,

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I think you could do something with the mixing that better differentiates what's actually playing the melody (like making the difference between the synth and violin and brass)

sweet tusk
west widget
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I think you should make it more prominent, give it an impact, something that allows them to recognize that there's a change

sweet tusk
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mb

west widget
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In any melodic piece, when there's a shift in an instrument having melody, there's always a phrase coming to a full close right before

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Or it could be passed onto a different instrument mid-expression and will finish that phrase

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What you have is a melody that's being passed around to different parts

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I think you could have some sort of an impact hit or a rise

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Something that tells the listener "BOOM, hear this sick melody! Listen!"

sweet tusk
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I maybe get it

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But I dont know

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I like if it comes sudden