industrial rock or something idk

[short epoch]

my main issue is abt the mix, im not really sure of what i should improve

[austere basin]

me neither, this is so good :D, I love the song in 1:49

[short epoch]

thank you!! :>

[austere basin]

but... Why is the mix your issue...? I mean... I think that's very good how it sounds

[short epoch]

Cause it may sound good, but it could sound better lmao

I think the spacing is not perfect and some things are too/not enough loud

For exemple the synth coming into play at 1:09 isn't very hearable on the mid and low frequencies, which makes it hard to be heard when it's not making a high note

• I think it may be too much in the center of mix, maybe I should make it slide from right ear to left ear and loop the panning

That's details but idk I think it would make the song better if I got back into it a bit :c

[austere basin]

Hmm... I can't find how... Well... I'm not that good at mixing but... I think that sounds good... Sorry if I can't give a important feedback

[short epoch]

Dw, even if it's not really detailed etc I'm happy that you gave me your opinion abt my track!!! :D
All feedback is good to take!!

[pseudo girder]

the 1:09 synth does sound very in the center, i'm going to tentatively recommend you experiment with StereoEnhancer effect if you haven't already

this is a super good track already though

also i hear a piano somewhere in the track and i'm not sure how well that fits. thats just personal opinion though

aside from that this sounds like something i'd hear playing an xbox 360 title from the late 2000s early 2010s, and i mean that as a compliment. good work

[short epoch]

Thanks for the feedback!! And yup, for the spacing, I'll definetely look into it

[short epoch]

Now that you say so idk if it fits really well, might search for a synth or something to replace it

[short epoch]

hehe, thanks i'm flattered

[pseudo girder]

not like piano hasn't been used in rock but it's not very industrial lol

[short epoch]

Yup that's what I thought too x))
I think I should aim for a dirtier sound

[short epoch]

new mix im getting tired i cant be satisfied TToTT

[short epoch]

im giving up for tonight 🫡

[austere basin]

I just noticed that... This make feel like a... Left 4 Dead ost...

Also... I just noticed scratches too

are very good :D

good job :DDD

[short epoch]

damn i'm happy you think so!!! to me it's a compliment 😎

i may have finished the song (im struggling help)

[viscid bronze]

Damn i love the beginning, i dont know why it gives me some matrix vibes

[short epoch]

thanks alot man ^^ ||you know what you are||

[viscid bronze]

|| we know we know||

but still gg

x)

[short epoch]

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[viscid bronze]

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[short epoch]

im turning into a skeleton

still not good enough im gonna explode

hope it's the one 🙏

[austere basin]

Daaaamn, this is very good :D

I've not listened the other yet

[short epoch]

i mean theres nothing that changes much tbh

[austere basin]

Idk if it's me but I felt different the beggining...

I also liked the FX

[austere basin]

I just noticed...

Well It's still very good :DDD

[short epoch]

well ty!!! :>

[austere basin]

:D

[short epoch]

welp here's the final mix

surely gonna upload it soon

[austere basin]

It's so good