How do I fix this master?

[tiny void]

I feel like it needs more percussion but I don't know what to add

[astral lichen]

This is beautiful! ✨
I won't lie, I don't feel like there is a need for more percs, especially if you're going to keep the vibe the track has already.

One thing I can say tho, you can try adding a subtle/soft kick with a more modern sounding clap panned to the right. It can be a similar pattern to the percs u have already. It would sound good ig. Just make it subtle tho.

Ik you're probably not thinking of doing so butttttt, I could definitely hear some trap-styke kicks coming on into the track- I meannnn this sounds like a perfect sample. Kanye could definitely use it.

But overall yeahh! It's really good, I like the vibe and pattern of percs. Great sounds choice overall. Great job 👏
Btwww, Did u make this entirely in LMMS??

[deep needle]

cool
maybe stop the claps for a part and replace it with acoustic drums/orchestra drums
also maybe add bass at some point (could be just cellos/contrabass if you want to keep things acoustic) since the low frequencies are empty

[tiny void]

Thanks for the advice