#umm uhh new song i think

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outer basalt
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im mostly worried about the pacing, i think it gets a little boring around the middle but i dont really know what to do about it

raw crane
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very loud

outer basalt
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mb

mighty grail
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I really like this, I like the "noisy" and "heavy" atmosphere this has. Although I have never really played the f-zero series much, it reminds me of that.

I'm no musical expert, just a hobbyist with very minimal grasp on music theory, but I can kinda agree with the middle feeling a little bit boring. I think mixing it up with some different chords and rhythms could help? I also sometimes try to spice things up with the introduction of a new instrument, but that's not always ideal. Again though, I'm not certain, I'm no expert, but there's my two cents anyway. Nevertheless, I still enjoy the song a good bit

raw crane
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good song where are you gonna use it

outer basalt
outer basalt
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replaced chord stabs somewhere with an arp, did something else that i forgot

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ignore the export thing at the beginning

raw crane
outer basalt
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not released yet

mellow holly
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you are making a 5 star meal here

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you'll go very far

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I really love the crunchy loud volume your songs have

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consider it a part of your identity tbh

raw crane
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no loud songs are f||xidbad||

raw crane
raw crane
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crunchy and loud is bad

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it's just headache inducing also your profile picture is an item from terraria

mellow holly
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Theres this thing called opinion

raw crane
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yes i have a strongly negative opinion on crunchy and loud music

outer basalt
raw crane
outer basalt
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this isn't useful feedback

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look at rule 1 in the feedback guidelines

raw crane
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honest opinions are allowed

outer basalt
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I don't see how giving an opinion is actionable critique when all the opinion is "it's bad"

mellow holly
outer basalt
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forgot what changed but reupload cause it got buried

raw crane
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for a good reaosn

mellow holly
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Foil could you just

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Um

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Talk like literally anywhere else