I tried making EDM

[remote gulch]

I hope you all like it! Feedback would also be appreciated

[muted mica]

i think you have a decent song idea here. the sounds used make it more like chiptune than EDM though. you could look into how to make a supersaw synth patch.

the bass needs some work. it's very quiet for EDM. when i turn it up it sounds like your bass is playing chords. i recommend only single notes.