wip remix

[austere pagoda]

remix of "K3YN0T3, L0CKN0T3, okafuwa - Oxygen"
i took a break from music for a while so it's a little hard making this, i can't tell what's missing at the drop

[austere pagoda]

improved a lot here, the lead was the problem i think

[sharp stream]

I think the volume of the drums (the snare in particular, and maybe the kick) is a bit high.
You could also increase the bass frequencies (of the bass) a little.

[pseudo mica]

i dont know if you put a filter in the drums but the kick have a little bit of resonance on the attack
nice track so far, i like the emotion
The snare is loud in the fill
nice drop, add a louder sub and basses, add stereo in the lead and move it with some reverb (just ideas)

Pretty good my dud

[novel apex]

definitely that snare is like godzilla to the mix

though i kinda like it towards the end as the song develops

maybe introduce the snare at lower volume / a gentler snare sample at first

drop could use some cymbals imo

[austere pagoda]

1 what do you mean by resonance on the attack?
2 what do you mean by the fill?

[pseudo mica]

Fill = pattern where you added lot of snares in sequence (or transition)
Resonance = loud freq in the sound

[austere pagoda]

ah, did it sound like a low frequency? i slightly boosted lows on the kick

[austere pagoda]

i forgot to send the update!!! i think i used most of the feedback, i think some is still not executed right

[coral pulsar]

imo the snare got too much high freq

and idk if it was ur intention but the voice is also not really noticable in the drop

some sidechaining especially for the saw like synth in the drop could be good too

[austere pagoda]

Hm, there is sidechain. I will increase it

[austere pagoda]

There is no voice in the drop at all, intentionally

[austere pagoda]

Just drop with update

[coral pulsar]

idk u can make ur own opinion on that. but i cut the freq that are too present

[austere pagoda]

Sounds nice

i think i was just getting fatigue and kept making the highs higher

[sharp stream]

yea I know that feeling