#been feeling bad, so i decided to pour my feelings again

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stone dune
strong blade
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synth lead at ~0:23-0:55 gets overpowered by drums too much imo, i'd either turn it up or automate it to get louder through that section

all of the fast hihat stuff is sick-- love how in your face the drums and dissonant synth stuff is
the drop out at 2:08 is cool but at like 2:14 i think it could use some help from drums or something else to build back into the 2:20 drop

at 2:20 i feel like the snare doesn't hit as hard as it should-- maybe a little too low pitched? not sure, good stuff though this is really cool

stone dune
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Thx my guy

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And yeah... beginning

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Needs balance

strong blade
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for sure, not a hard fix though

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could also just make the drums come in quieter and crescendo into the next section

dusky swift
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I ain't anywhere near qualified enough to give any technical feedback, but I will say this is a weird but somewhat awesome track.

dusky swift
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ur welcome