#Feedback on this finished track?

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drowsy heart
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any is appreciated.

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whoops... forgot to post it at the start, no worries though, just posted it

wanton lance
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i love the creepy background noises and the song is a bop. tho at around 1:07 when the drum goes half time, maybe it could use some drum fill because it feels a bit sudden to me. also i feel the drums could use some more crash cymbals to make the start of each section hit more.

drowsy heart
ivory flame
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Seconding that I think that transitory drum beats between sections would be good. Great song!
BTW what's with all that silence in the end? Do you have an ending section planned? Maybe an end "note" of sorts could be good.

cobalt linden
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Love the sound! I would also say that some fills are in order. Could definitely use that bit of excitement between segments

drowsy heart
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also yeah fills are definitely a good idea