#Looking for general feedback in terms of watchability

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frozen fjordBOT
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Hi @tired burrow, your post could receive better feedback with more detail.

Consider clarifying:

  • What specific areas you want feedback on
  • Your goal with the content
  • What you're unsure about

My concerns:

  • Post is extremely short
  • No specific feedback area mentioned
  • No platform or content type specified
earnest steeple
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The Title and Thumbnail are supposed to compliment each other. In this case, I don't see that happening. What does the players dream have to do with nostalgia and why are you demonstrating it through minecraft? These questions leave me confused before I even click on the video. So maybe fix the packaging. The intro left me hanging for 25 seconds. That should explain my POV in terms of the watchability.

tired burrow
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i appreciate it thank you

earnest steeple
tired burrow
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dang maybe i failed at that too then 😂

earnest steeple
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I don’t want you to think you think you failed at anything. It’s just that I’m left a confused. The visuals are cool, your voice is soothing. Your idea has potential. But the packaging is Super important IMO

echo junco
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The pacing is to slow but the idea has potental your audio is also good nice visuals and camera angles

tired burrow