Does this ROBLOX gaming video intro need any changes or improvement?

[covert canyon]

This intro is for an video about explaining the 5 levels of ROBLOX events. Is this intro interesting and engaging? Do I need to add any edits or change any graphics or sfxs? If you seen this intro would you keep watching the video? Lemme know!

[rugged slate]

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[sweet ferry]

your mic audio peaks pretty hard. Make sure to set your microphones track to -14 LUFS so youtube plays nice with it

the content seems pretty interesting though. Bright colors, fast transitions, always something happening on screen

[covert canyon]

Thanks bro! I see what you mean about the audio thanks! Imma keep the video interesting so the video can be good!

[vapid abyss]

Audio peaks, Not enough sound effects or music in the background that keeps kids entertained. They have 0 attention span so edit for that. You could probably make an intro like this shorter but faster paced to be like 8 seconds. (i don't mean this to be harsh, just mentioning the niche your targeting but) You speak a little slow for kids to stay entertained and you need to fluctuate your voice alot from higher pitches. Your editing is pretty good just the audio is lacking a bit. Overall not bad :D

[covert canyon]

Yes with Roblox content your videos need to be overstimulating a little bit lol. Next video Imma make sure the audio is better and speak slower like you said! I appreciate your advice and honesty Mori!

[vapid abyss]

Sorry I meant the opposite, I think you gotta speak faster to get your point across a little quicker, Sometimes kids aren't paying attention for a bit and if they notice your still on the same thing, they'll click off. If you spoke a little faster or shortened the script for the intro, they would stick around longer