#Need Feedback On A new Style of Editing

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grim mango
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Nice feedback post! Please keep in mind that all feedback is provided out of the good will of the community, so it may take some time for you to get a response.

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outer hollow
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The video is well styled, the different angles definitely add to the visual story telling. Music is fine, I found it obnoxious towards the end. As you seem to be going for slapstick, a sound effect for the falling people at the start felt needed, though you added it later. I did like that when you zoomed out to show people falling, the music was quieter, as if you were far away.

As someone uninitiated to Hive Skywars, I was lost the whole time. No idea what you were doing or why. I am sure for someone who knows more about this it would be great.

marsh forum
grim mango
# outer hollow The video is well styled, the different angles definitely add to the visual stor...

First of all Thank you for the feedback, it really motivates me and i really appreciate it.
Secondly, yes sadly for someone who doesn't know about the game it would be hard to tell whats actually going on, im planing on doing a voice cover on my next video when i do get my mic.
Thirdly, thank you for pointing out the end, for being obnoxious and i would change that in the future videos,
And once again i appreciate your feedback ^^

grim mango
marsh forum
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Or if you are feeling fancy try mirroring your screen and recording via pc 😄