#let me know what parts of this video was boring, 6 minutes long comedy/commentary-ish.

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thorn aspen
distant birch
# thorn aspen hi. so basically i am havinga hard time discerning and being able to tell what p...

I think the concept of the video has an astounding potential to be a success @thorn aspen . Unfortunately the delivery is flat... The thumbnail is confusing and not composed properly, the titled is worded in a way that makes you almost sound like a criminal. The video's hook is bland and you are not even looking at the camera... I would have personally stopped watching at 10 seconds, but I pushed thorugh to see if you would deliver on the concept in a proper way and... you didn't. The entire video was you saying that you found picture you couldn't share. The editing itself is almost non-existent... The concept of the video is cool tho, you just need to work on how it actually looks like. If I had to highlight a positive, the change in location (and clothes) helps people be engaged for longer

thorn aspen
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i was also told of change of clothes and locations by others so it seems i need to get a real setup going

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was there any problems with the audio quality?

distant birch