General Constructive Criticism Wanted

[light stone]

Its a good, informative video. Though for the sake of consistency, Kevin Gates' part has to have some commentary. I felt a bit distraughted from you explaining what tory lanes did to all of the sudden have random clips of kevin gates. Sure he kicked someone, but you have to explain why he did it. What's the context etc.

But for now, its very informative !

[steep walrus]

Tyty, I appreciate your time. And looking back this is also what I was thinking, def will add!

[steep walrus]

Other than the Kevin gates thing is there anything else you could point out? General quality maybe, confusion somewhere? Idk

[light stone]

For the tory lanes's call in prison. Maybe add some subtitles on what he was saying?

[steep walrus]

Okay so I’ve implemented the changes, the video now sits around 6mins long. My only my question is should I add more people into it?

I definitely want to go deeper into the psychology of the people + I have a friend who is a psychologist and willing to talk and answer questions, so I almost want to add a section in the video where she explains too

However I’m feeling a bit obligated to get it posted asap so idk

[light stone]

Yoooo yeah add that too actually

[light stone]

You dont have to upload asap tho (no rocky).
Just finish it at your own pace cuz if you upload it now, it wouldnt be as polished

[steep walrus]

heres my progress so far, the last secion is quite raw cus i ran out of time today

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lseYu3aEjKw

however im thinking of after each rapper listed, then having the psychologist kinda give a personalised review into the mental state of the specific person (if there is an opportunity)