Feedback on recent video

[last sluice]

look i don't want to be a downer here but unless this is staged its a super terrible idea to record yourself breaking into places and posting it online. these places can absolutely press charges against you for trespass

[last sluice]

@hexed depot
not trying to discourage you here, so heres my other 2c after watching/ thinking for a bit
other than my main concern i am not sure the thumbnail / title was very compelling. You basically gave away the whole video without me ever having to click, i didn't feel very compelled to click.
my mind would've gone to something like
Can you get free admission anywhere?
or something like that, it builds intrigue because you have pondered a question that the viewer is now thinking about and they maybe want the answer.

William Osman is one of my favorite youtubers and i think this video is a great example of that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GtoDsJDYWX4
it asks you a question in a way that really makes you want to click

I also think you sort of excluded one of the most compelling parts of this whole story which would've been how you convinced these people to let you in like seeing that conversation, even if it was a reenactment or a dub or something (assuming you didn't want other random people on camera) would've been great

I think you're fairly comfortable on camera which is great, you seem confident, you've got a lot going for you. You just need a little more practice on the editing side and to maybe stick to slightly safer ideas, but i think you'll end up being successful with some practice
Don't do anything illegal like that. It doesn't seem like a big deal and i don't personally think it is but you never know how the people who own those companies will react.

[hexed depot]

Hey thank you for the thorough feedback it really means a lot. Yeah honestly you're right, I think I got carried away with the idea but looking back it isn't right. From now on I'm gonna do legal and safe videos only. Really appreciate the heads up about that. I'll also work on storytelling/building intrigue a lot more. Appreciate the encouragement too! Hoping that with consistency and getting better at editing/storytelling the views will increase