Hey there,
I found the video to be long. I didn't watch all way through, i stopped around 2min, then skipped around. You are inserting some edits here and there, but for my taste it's not interesting enough.
-The music is nice, but it's not gonna make me stay.
-I cannot hear you because of the music, so I guess that the gameplay should speak for itself and therefore it should be strong enough to carry your entire video. Which didn't do much for me. I didn't feel like I was watching some high level stuff, it felt like a regular playthrough.
-I think if you want to keep your entire video with almost no editing, you need to have a strong presence with your voice, be funny, or technical or teach depending on what you want to do.
Some people here will tell you what value do you bring into your video ? Is it jokes, your personality, you editing, your way of thinking strategies ?
The value of your current video I would say is : You're just playing and you dropped the vid with a bit of music. Which can be found all around Youtube.
You are doing far better than me, so I don't want to look rude with giving you that feedback. I'm not your target audience, but this is my 2 cents 🤙