#Any way to improve my content

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quasi oyster
median stone
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I’m mainly gonna focus on the problems of the t&t of your most recent video

T&t problems:

  • lack of context, based on the thumbnail I have no idea what the video is gonna be about, I understand you added an walking dead disc in the bg, but it’s so small that the chance of the viewer seeing it is little to one so I discarded it when reviewing th thumbnail

  • important elements are too small, if you made the walking dead disc bigger it would’ve given me much more content for what the video is about

  • doesn’t communicate any value to the viewer, this is mainly because the viewer doesn’t understand what the video is about so their too confused too even consider value but even if they did understand what the video was about, they wouldn’t care that you’re hooked on a walking dead game cause they don’t know who you are so there’s no reason for it to be important to them

T&t strengths

  • I rlly liked the simplicity of your title and thumbnail, that makes it much easier for the viewer to quickly scan

  • I also rlly liked the simplicity of your title, makes it much more appealing and quicker to read by the viewer

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I hope this helps 🙂