#New poetic animation with face - much different! (not uploaded yet)

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stoic dome
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I'm personally not a fan of the way you read the poem.
The cadence is off and I found it hard to follow.

Art is art, there is no reason to tune it down if it fits your vision.

bitter temple
queen tree
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Personally I dont think this is a type of niche to preform high level

kindred cargo
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Since you already made it just post it. Shorts are hit and miss.

I agree with Vision. Just need change the delivery in terms of pace and tone.

Are you delivering a peace soothing content? Or Stoic style? The delivery and bgm need somehow brought that vibe.

bitter temple
stoic dome
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I think poetry fits longform better than shortform.

Shortform is content you just consume by doomscrolling.

queen tree
bitter temple