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hollow cedar
Currently im trying to figure out how to improve my content, at first the video had a pretty decent retention rate (40%) but it's now slumped back to 20%
the way i look at my content it just seems boring to me wondering how i could spice it up
As well how could i improve my titles for videos like this? I know i should base it around curiosity, but im having a hard time finding a way to make a title that provokes curiosity at all
thorny charm
Well, as someone who hasn’t watched this video yet, tell me what I get out of it? Like what’s the value proposition here for me?
hollow cedar
Well, as someone who hasn’t watched this video yet, tell me what I get out of it...
Basically people in the persona community are always debating about the difficulty of the games, and my point with the vid was the game is so easy it's a problem
thorny charm
Basically people in the persona community are always debating about the difficul...
Wouldn’t something like “Is Persona 3 Actually Difficult?” Or something along that lines be more in line with the content then?
Currently just looks like a let’s play style wording, again haven’t watched it tho.
hollow cedar
Wouldn’t something like “Is Persona 3 Actually Difficult?” Or something along th...
Yeah, i did want to get across how easy i think the game is in the title though
hollow cedar
Currently just looks like a let’s play style wording, again haven’t watched it t...
It's supposed to be more of a video essay type of video, but i see what you mean it does look too much like a lets play now that i think about it
thorny charm
pose a question in your title, it would make it more essay coded the quickest.
I think the actual video feels prettt good to watch, I watched the first 30. But it doesn’t feel like it matches the title super well personally.
hollow cedar
So i should change the title to something like "Is persona 3 Reload too easy?" Or that "is persona 3 actually difficult?"