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slow pawn
I don't think this is an intro at all, it's a title screen but I guess it communicates well that you're going to talk about fnaf, but idk what kind of talk youre going to talk about which is something you might probably want to work on
I don't think there's enough visual nor content that's hooking me right now
tidal crater
I don't think this is an intro at all, it's a title screen but I guess it commun...
its a retrospective
slow pawn
its a retrospective
Yea but I'm not getting that at all I mean it's 6 seconds so next clip will be straight to content I assume?