Spent some time filming and editing a day in my life working at a ramen shop just wanted to know everyone’s thoughts when it comes to if everything makes sense and how y’all would rank the editing thanks so much!
#My first YouTube video
noble tundra
static pawn
Narration would def improve retention.
noble tundra
Narration would def improve retention.
true I’ll do it in my next vid
static pawn
true I’ll do it in my next vid
You’ve got a job that can be easily romanticized, so I think you can position yourself uniquely in the vlog niche
Also, my pet peeve, starting vlogs off waking up is boring, not usually grounds for a great hook to a video, and overdone. Just cause it’s a day in your life doesn’t mean you need to edit it linearly, ya feel?
noble tundra
You’ve got a job that can be easily romanticized, so I think you can position yo...
hopefully I wonder how long it takes for my first vid to get some traction wondering if my new acct has smt to do with it
noble tundra
Also, my pet peeve, starting vlogs off waking up is boring, not usually grounds ...
yeah I know I’m trying to fit the mold but I could also see it being overdone 100%
what do you think would be good in terms of hooks that match my day in the life style
noble tundra
What: constructed a day in my life showing my mundane tasks throughout the day and wanted to showcase the slow yet real nature of my work in hopes that the audience will start to romanticize their lives more as a result of my video. A combination of real cuts of me working as well as b rolls of motivational content sprinkled in as well, a combination of hyper realism coupled with a sprinkle of deluded optimism.
Type of feedback: I guess what I want to know is how my current content format compares against other "day in the life" videos that end up performing very well or if my content is too all over the place to identify a central theme, just want to know if this is a solid start and if I should continue this format in future vids or if I should keep my current one and build on top of it.
Specifics:
Are my clips too long especially bringing out the tables cleaning etc? Should i make them all shorter and if so at what length
Is the audio placed in the correct spots as in do you think the audio type and timing matches the flow of the video?
What do you think of my intro and outro, does it encapsulate the mundane nature of the day and the optimistic "day end" feeling at night?
What can I do if anything to improve myself for future videos, I want to keep myself in the day in the life niche for now while I get my name out there?
Are there too many clips throughout the vid of me serving customers, should I lower the amount of serving clips maybe 1-2 an hour to make the videos significantly shorter or do you think people appreciate the long form format of this video?
thank you to every single one of you guys who are taking their time to review and provide constructive criticism for future videos, couldnt have asked for a better community, any feedback is appreciated thanks again! 🫶