tell me why im bad

[stiff trout]

made 1 video mid may, preformed well so decided to try again this time with a broader concept. I tried to improve the editing to keep it more entertaining tho im still not happy with it and have other ideas on how to do it better next time. I mainly want tips on general structure and how to go about it, im not a big scripts guy because i find it hard to convey my actual emotion when im reciting words, would kinda ruin the point because im just talking about things i think are snazzy. ive already got a lot of notes myself but an extra pair of eyes has never hurt so anything helps!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0Erm10R0fw&t=39s

its all meant to semi tacky aswell because i just think its kinda funny, idk how to feel about visual consistency because its kinda all over the place but i like doing different things for different parts

[hoary lance]

Ok I tried to watch the video it's not for me clearly, but honestly I had no idea what you were talking about or what the video was supposed to be about till around the 1:50 mark. Your problem isn't editing, you clearly know how to put things together and it's not visual consistency, that's fine. The issue is the message you are trying to get across. What is it? I think based on the chapter titles and hashtags and what little I understood is that you want to talk about getting into a flowstate and I guess maybe how to get into flowstate and how much better being in a flowstate is. You said you don't want to write a script. That's fine, but you can write and outline and follow that, making sure you hit all the points you want to cover before moving onto the next topic. Otherwise you're going to continue to put out this soup of thoughts and no one but you and your close friends are going to understand you.

[stiff trout]

Yeah this is exactly what i was looking for tysm. i thought this too watching it over but i have a habit of second guessing everything so having a second affirmation really helps me out. i wanted to go back and change everything but came to the conclusion if i could have it my way id redo the video 10 times over before im happy with it and i should probably just upload it and start fresh on a new idea and polish these things there instead of dwelling on it.

[hoary lance]

Yes I think you'll really benefit from making a brief outline of the type of video you want to make. Write a brief outline, throw it into chatgpt let it format it for you into a 10minute video and use that as the outline for the video you want to make. It will keep you videos on point and you will probably find it easier to break up your single video into several videos each covering a single topic.

How to get into flowstate playing overwatch
How to get into flowstate playing for honor
How to get into flowstate playing whatever other game.

These are much more interesting and straight to the point than 12minuted of rambling and hoping someone watches the whole video from start to finish. Easier on the algorithm side too.

[stiff trout]

Yeah for sure, i mega agree. I did write an outline and then bullet points to go over but ultimately forgot to mention what I'm actually talking about and let my brain tranlate without thinking lol. appreciate the feedback man, feel alot more confident going onto this next project now!

[hoary lance]

G'luck!!!