#Would you please brutally butcher my video

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torpid cedar
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https://youtube.com/shorts/_g4jPZRQffw

I'm changing style of my videos all the time but usually I get stuck at 300 views. This is 9th video, I unlisted 2 and edited and re-uploaded them, so 7 on the channel.

I know it's not been 24 hours since the upload but it's been if I get stuck at 300, it will stay at it for the rest of the time.

How can I know if the content I'm making has potential? Maybe people want news on AAA games, or hidden gems?

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foggy jolt
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Bro this looks like one of those shitty mobile game ads.
Did you get paid for this cause if not you should've. You just made an ad for this game for free. Nothing about this is original or interesting. Plus the ai voice on top makes it even less interesting

torpid cedar
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The point of the channel is to showcase indie games (not sure if it should be about new and upcoming or hidden gems though, please advise)

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And since hook is everything in Shorts, I try to keep up the pace.

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for voice over, I don't think my own voice is good (enough) and tried my best with AI but it's apparent, apparently.

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couple others that are 1.3k are not that different though.

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So I tried to have explosive content to keep viewer while talking about the game

hot mica
rapid fable
torpid cedar
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Thank you so much for your time and advice.

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What do you think about the content itself?

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What about the channel itself, is it better to focus on the latest and upcoming games? Or hidden gems? I think both wont work.

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Also, I'm planning to do just shorts, what do you think?

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I'm not after some quick buck but I like to find the auidence interested in my content, albeit 10 people.

hot mica
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I think you can definitely manage to showcase new and hidden. It’s good to diversify your content and keep it fresh

rapid fable
rapid fable
torpid cedar
rapid fable
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nonono i'm just saying in general

hot mica
torpid cedar
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What do you guys think about the length and the caption. Both style of caption and the text itself.

rapid fable
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you can definitely fit enough to entice someone to play from a 60-second short (or even up to 3 minutes, i've no clue who's eligible and who's not eligible for those lengths)

hot mica
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That’s why it’s up to you on what kind of content you want to make. You just have to control quality

torpid cedar
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I had a 70 second video and got like 5 views, I cut it into 35 seconds and went into the 300 views, not sure if it was me or yt's bug though.

rapid fable
torpid cedar
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Do you like the first commenter think it's like a crappy mobile ad?

torpid cedar
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I saw latest shorts of some of biggest youtubers in this niche and I think my videos are similar but since they already have a very large subs, it's hard for me to tell how well their shorts do. I don't know the ratio.

rapid fable
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The AI generated voice definitely helps give that vibe to me

torpid cedar
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I will change that and also make higher resolution.

rapid fable
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it's also so slow the speaking

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would be good if it can talk as soon as possible without the notably long pause at the beginning

torpid cedar
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I wanted the first hit to be properly land for hook rather than video and audio at the same time. OK, I'll change that too. Ty.

torn onyx
# torpid cedar What do you think about the content itself?

You didn't actually show the game off. The background footage is, it seems, from a gameplay trailer and chaotic. It does not match what you're talking about. And I have no idea what's going on on the screen. Your description of the game is incredibly generic and feels AI generated or you personally have not played the game yourself. The video feels like it's about nothing. Try making your videos more condensed. Talk about one exceptional part of the game for example. One interesting or cool game mechanic, etc.

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In terms of shorts, I always feel like I feel like it's easier to not go broad with the topic

rapid fable
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right there's not much specifics that stand out

torn onyx
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Because to fit a proper fuller showcase into 60 seconds (or preferably less) requires actually good writing, which is kinda hard

torpid cedar
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Thank both of you, and others, so much.

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Is there any way to find what people are searching for in this niche? With google trends or similar tool?

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I'll unlist and do the changes and re-upload, I think it's a good way to gauge the changes.

rapid fable
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if it's already published, i don't think it's going to help

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youtube algorithm seems to not push reuploads as hard as the original

torpid cedar
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Thanks

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Should I leave bad performing ones up?

rapid fable
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yes

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keep it as backlog

torpid cedar
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Thanks

rapid fable
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what i've learned from here if it doesn't do good, don't reupload, just leave it
just focus on the next piece of content and apply what you've learned

torpid cedar
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Thank you so much.

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What do you think about the style of caption

rapid fable
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in my "very new to youtubing" opinion
it doesn't detract nor improve the video

torpid cedar
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It's mr.beast-ish one-word bombardment

rapid fable
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it's just a caption

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like what everyone already does

torpid cedar
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I can change it to have whole sentences and highlight the parts already said

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There are so many parameters and very hard to find what change was positive without making a video per each parameter

rapid fable
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it really does not do much to improve or detract -- but i'd say make it less visually distracting perhaps
it's supposed to be a supplement

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no motion blur maybe?

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but there are definitely more important things to focus on imo

torpid cedar
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alright, thanks again!