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bold kiln May 14, 2025, 12:26 PM

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Just looking for any constructive criticism, ways I can improve. So far not much organic traffic... Fashion content. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qGb_SL4CUo

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OG Balenciaga Triple S review - My favorite sneaker of all time

Kickin this off with the sneaker that got me into fashion - the original made-in-Italy Balenciaga Triple S. Whether you love it or hate it, you have to admit it's iconic. And it's not perfect (heaviest sneaker ever made) but I love it, warts and all.

IMO, the 2017 OGs are far superior to the made-in-China pairs that came later. From the distres...

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lethal dagger May 14, 2025, 2:00 PM

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The video is great but It kinda starts of really slow and if u could improve the thumbnail maybye put a little text behind you too other than that the video looks very professional good job, just do a little more editing and make it a little fast paced or however suits your channel.

bold kiln May 14, 2025, 5:39 PM

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Thanks dude! Just curious what do you mean by text behind me, just like visually tuck it behind my shoulder or add more text?

bold kiln May 14, 2025, 7:40 PM

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Changed out the thumbnail to try and give it some more oomph.

lethal dagger May 15, 2025, 5:29 PM

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bold kiln Thanks dude! Just curious what do you mean by text behind me, just like visually...

Yeah

lethal dagger May 15, 2025, 5:29 PM

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bold kiln Changed out the thumbnail to try and give it some more oomph.

This looks 100% better, congratulations

#Anyone up for giving some feedback? First video posted