To keep with tradition, I'm sending my WIP intro here to get feedback. Compliments are welcomed but if you see some glaring weaknesses or is just overall boring, let me know. Nothing will hurt my feelings. Thanks in advance!
#Need Brutal Feedback on Intro
hexed viper
plain trench
Ok so I like the pacing of the opening, but at .06 "split resources" the resource part doesn't come across very clear I had to repeat this part to understand thats what you said.
plain trench
To keep with tradition, I'm sending my WIP intro here to get feedback. Complimen...
Solid music choices that fits the intro, and sound effects used are not over the top and compliment the intro. Personally the only thing that wasnt clear was the word but thats nitpicking. Based off that intro Id watch the video.
hexed viper
Im glad you brought up the resources part because I thought that myself it wasnt clear enough but I was kinda lazy but I will for sure fix it now that you brought it up.
Thank you for the feedback it is really appreciated!
hexed viper
@wheat veldt
Always love the reviews but knowing how much work you put into them I always understood taking a break but I’m happy you’re back!
wheat veldt
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Grading System
We use the tier system! If you get 3+ minor issues or 1+ Major issue, we stop the review!
🔥 - Perfect! Impressive!
✅ - Average to Good
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｡ﾟ☾☁︎ TIER 1: FUNDAMENTALS ☁︎ ☾｡ﾟ
✩ Video Clarity
- ✅Resolution (At least 1080p HD, unless stylized otherwise)
- ✴️Lighting Quality (No unnecessary shadows, overexposure, or darkness)
- ✴️Camera Work (Framing is stable, no shaking, properly positioned)
- ✅Visual Sharpness (No blur, pixelation, or bad rendering)
✩ Audio Clarity
- ❗Clear Audio (No muffled, distorted, or low-quality audio)
- ✅Balanced Levels (No jumps/dips or large gaps in levels)
- ✅Background Noise & SFX (No overpowering ambient sounds or SFX)
- ✅Music Use (Background music is properly leveled and appropriate)
- ✅No Technical Audio Issues (No audio crackling, peaking, or mismatched sync)
✩ Basic Video Structure
- ✅Logical Progression*(The video has an understandable flow)*
- ✅No Pacing Issues*(Doesn’t drag or move too fast)*
- ✅Clear Segmentation*(The video is divided into structured sections)*
- ✅No Jarring Cuts*(Scene transitions are smooth)*
- ✅Functional Visuals*(On-screen elements support understanding)*
- ✅Follows Policies*(The video is likely YT safe)*