devout condor
Hi, Poik, cool name btw.
Music is too loud in the beginning.
Took you 40 seconds to get into the actual gameplay, would rather talk about all those details at the beginning whilst playing the game.
Pacing is too slow, there are moments where you barely speak, but maybe that’s what you’re going for?
I like the “synonyms” edit in the vid, also the sound choice is good imo. As weird at is it sounds, it feels nostalgic and it makes me relate to you even more.
I need a bit more energy from you maaan, please!!!!!!
The title is cool, you play the FOMO tactic, which is cool.
But I’d add something that pops in the thumbnail, maybe some text or something that makes it pop? Idk.
Considering that most users use the dark theme on YT, you don’t want to make your videos blend in with the YT background.
Hopefully this helps even the slightest, but all in all, nice vid, man, keep it pushing<3
slow blaze