#How Could I Become A Better YouTube Gamer?

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balmy linden
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Hi y’all!

I’m looking for some feedback on one of my latest videos, it’s public/live. This is a new channel with only a few videos on it for a mobile game called Battle Nations that’s currently in an Open Beta.

This game used to be very popular, (top 3 in 2013) but then a ton of drama with ownership happened. It’s back now!

WHAT IM LOOKING FOR (pls)

  • How’s the Packaging over all for the video? Thumbnail, tags, title etc?
  • how’s the pacing and tone of the video?
  • How could I improve the first 30 seconds with this video?
  • any other notes you might see that I didn’t!

THE SIEGE OF MARIN MISSION in BATTLE NATIONS (Beta Gameplay) | Episode #9
https://youtu.be/99w8GXAtx1k

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THE SIEGE OF MARIN MISSION in BATTLE NATIONS (Beta Gameplay) | Epis...

IT'S TIME FOR THE SIEGE OF MARIN BABY

During The Siege of Marin, the city comes under attack from a Rebel army led by General Ashe. The 95th Rifle Company is the only Imperial military force close enough to reinforce Marin's defenders, so it falls to the player to drive Ashe away and lift the siege.

Much later, an unnamed Veteran is revealed t...

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balmy linden
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How Could I Become A Better YouTube Gamer?

plucky nova
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I really like your thumbnail design, can't really comment on the titles since I'm not familiar with the game and don't know what people will be looking for.

I feel like you've got the basic game-style editing down pretty well, but the video still felt pretty slow. You didn't get to any gameplay until 3 minutes into the video. I could imagine starting off with gameplay and then maybe doing a flashback when you get punished for spinning the wheel to explain why whatever just happened sucks even more than usual.

Overall I think you're on the right track, but I watch gameplay videos to see what people are doing with different builds and strategies. I didn't really get that feel from what you were doing, it's more like you were just playing and narrating the game as you went along.

balmy linden
# plucky nova I really like your thumbnail design, can't really comment on the titles since I'...

Honestly, that last part got me. Yeah I would have to agree with you now watching my videos back with “just playing and narrating as you went along”.

The structure of the video, I felt like someone would point that out, just didn’t know how else to structure the video to get faster to that gameplay.

but definitely going to be taking a step back to see about taking away a bit of that just playing/narrating

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Thank you for the notes! 🙏🏾

ashen flint
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Thumbnail slaps

balmy linden
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Thank you! glad to have one thing in the right direction haha