How can I make my video better?

[cunning portal]

Maybe make the title like ones of these:

• From Sketch to Keychain (feat. @shirakamifubuki)
• Making a Cute Keychain (feat. @shirakamifubuki)
• How I Turned Shirakami Fubuki’s Sketch Into a Cute Keychain with 3D Printing

Something that has keywords to catch people searching for this kind of stuff such as fans of Fubuki, or 3d printing enthusiasts, or people who enjoy cute little sketches like this.

The thumbnail can be improved to include the original sketch on the left and your final outcome on the right, making them the only 2 things that appear on the thumb; along with a neutral/gradient background that lets the images pop

Apart from that I think it’s a good video initially. You show the final product right away which is a huge plus, good music choice, but your voice audio can be a little louder. That or just turn down your bg music a bit more when you’re talking

If you’re lucky enough to have a willing friend or family member, it can really help boost the integrity of a tutorial if you ask them to follow it to completion. It can highlight parts of your tutorial that’s difficult to follow or might require more detail

[stark ore]

I actually disagree on the title suggestions
It's pretty messy to add feat. somebody at the end and the original title already has Shirakami Fubuki in it which is good
And also the 3rd title is way too long and would get cut off

You're thumbnail suggestion is pretty good though

I personally feel like "Turning Shirakami Fubuki's Mascot Into a Keychain" would be a better suggestion for a title

[cunning portal]

I whole heartedly agree actually. I cant say I was confident on my original suggestions but thought there was definitely room for improvement; so I’m glad you chimed in with that 👍

[stark ore]

yknow what;s funny, I've actually given this guy feedback before on reddit like a month ago

[cunning portal]

Small world lol