#Please criticise, tear apart and devour (constructively) my new gym vlog serious!

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mint mist
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Please give me any advice on audience retention, thumbnail, title, my camera presence, speech or anything else! Some thing I am aware of such as camera angles, but please mention them still if it’s an important point in your opinion :).

PUSH DAY | Shoulders, Chest and Triceps
https://youtu.be/LicgnjsvDI4

Intro (00:00)
Dumbell Incline Bench Press (00:12)
Tricep Rope Extensions (02:56)
Machine Shoulder Press (05:09)
Machine Chest Press (07:10)
Lateral Raises (08:34)
Overhead Tricep Extensions (12:03)
Outro (14:30)

#pushday #PushWorkout #ChestDay #ShoulderWorkout #TricepsTraining #FitnessVlog #PushDayVibes #StrengthGoals #GymLife #FitnessJourney ...

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topaz umbra
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Nice fitness contentor unite! Your thumbnail seem bare, but so does sam sulek so what do I know lol

mint mist
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Ok! True, perhaps I could add an extra element to spice it up a big @topaz umbra thank you!

topaz umbra
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.where in the UK u based?

mint mist
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South London buddy what about you?

topaz umbra
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Well south east

mint mist
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Nice man! Yeah bro your content is great. Great info and I like that you keep it light hearted too. Keep up what you’re doing bro it’s very impressive.

topaz umbra
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what you think about this thumbnail? 😄

mint mist
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I like it! Im guessing the video is something like "i went to the most expensive gym"? If so it does communicate that idea. From my understanding of thumbnails, would a dollar sign or a dollar amount may be something to consider.

topaz umbra
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i appreciate the feedback! lmk if you wanna collab on something irl