Is this a good thumbnail?

[lime condor]

If not, what would you change?

[near hatch]

what's the title you have in mind and also what's the video about?

[lime condor]

Title: Tourist tries Ninja Gaiden Black 2 on Very Hard FIRST time
About: Twitch highlights of me playing it first time and getting rekt

[near hatch]

So for the title I think it's too long and wordy + it's kinda vague and isn't really all that interesting
For the thumbnail, you should probably try to highlight something interesting or funny that happened in your playthrough
As it is now, it doesn't really show anything and all the elements are kind of disconnected
It's just some in-game screenshot which is unrelated to the text you have and adding yourself isn't really necessary in this case if isn't it contributing to what the focus of the thumbnail is

[lime condor]

was thinking all the exact things, just looking for confirmation. thanks a lot. DM me if you ever need an opinion on something.

[lime condor]

better?

ngl i hate the reaction face but it's the only one that makes sense with the context of the thumbnail and video

[loud spire]

I love reaction facess in thumbnails it always makes me wanna click the video lmao cuz i wanna see why you had that reaction etc etc

[near hatch]

a bit I think
I feel like you just need a better overall idea because the 83 deaths later doesn't really work that well still

[lime condor]

I appreciate your perspective thank you that helps a lot