Does anyone have any idea how I could make this thimbnail look better? I like the right half but the left half with the crossbow looks wrong
#I need advice
dapper summit
atomic plaza
Okay so in general make it clearer but if I get a bit more info I will help a lot more, I am actually talking to my thumbnail artist right now haha. But what game is this? and what title is this?
dapper summit
the game is Ancient dungeon and the Title will be something like "Is This The Best Indie VR Game?"
atomic plaza
Can you possibly make just the red thing in the middle a little bit bigger to cut out a bit of the dead space and potentially tune down the glow just a bit?
The colors on your sword and bow are a bit dull you should up the saturation just a bit on them and the yellow of the arrow sticks out like a sore thumb from the rest of it so just up the saturation on the two weapons and not make the arrow stand out as much if that makes sense.
Also I would honestly have the title be "Is This The Best VR Indie Game" Just to put Indie and Game together to help the flow of the title.
And after that if you post it again I will def continue helping
And this is coming from my thumbnail artist mostly since we are talking right now haha
If you do those they say it will "look more dynamic" lmaooo
dapper summit
alright cool thanks when I have time Im gonna work on it and try all thoes things, this is my first thumbnail so hopefully it turns out good
dapper summit
Can you possibly make just the red thing in the middle a little bit bigger to cu...
okay heres what I have.
atomic plaza
I really like that! I would up the saturation like 5% more on the sword but other than that this looks great!
You cut out a lot of deadspace, you can clearly see what the thing we need to be focusing on and it clearly puts the point across that it is some sort of fight.
dapper summit
You cut out a lot of deadspace, you can clearly see what the thing we need to be...
Okay, this is something else I tried, I didnt up the saturation on the sword yet but I will after this
here it is with a little more sturation
atomic plaza
Honestly I like it without the text more I think its cleaner
will you move the text to the bottom for us to look at?
dapper summit
yeah sure one sec
dapper summit
will you move the text to the bottom for us to look at?
here you go
1, 2, and 3
dapper summit
I like 1 the best I mean
okay I made it a bit smaller
atomic plaza
I really like 2 and so does my thumbnail artist
I think you made this look REALLY good man
dapper summit
thank you! I have some experience in graphic design so hopefully it turned out alright for my first thumbnail