Feedback on first vid

[pearl pollen]

What: it's about Christian motivation
Type of feedback: I need feedback on most of the stuff (audio,video quality,script) since im pretty much a beginner.
Specific: Is the thumbnail catchy? Are the first 5 seconds good enough? Do I need to make the editing more catchy?

https://youtu.be/YWRn_TL1MwM?si=qyKqZP883IWnHNqT

I tried my best btw it's like the first time I've ever even edited something

[subtle abyss]

Thumbnail wise the text blends in too much with the yellow background. For audio please don’t use AI voice lol

[void canopy]

Yeah it makes it seem a little lifeless when inherently it’s something personal. I hope I don’t come off as rude 👍

[pearl pollen]

Oh

I tried my best ig but I somehow need to make the editing more catchy

[pearl pollen]

I'll reupload this vid and send the link here tell me if I made good changes

[pearl pollen]

I made the bg less yellow

[hexed garnet]

everything is still blending in quite a bit, i'd try a different background picture. also put a black stroke on the text to make it pop out

[pearl pollen]

https://youtu.be/YShkQT6wB44?si=1sWAu96Uw7sqHJGw

[pearl pollen]

Alright thnks

[pearl pollen]

Hey everyone this is what I edited, I changed the music and edited some stuff and changed the thumbnail

[hexed garnet]

i recommend not using the AI voice especially if u ever plan on getting monetized. youtube will deny ur channel for using it. maybe u wanna keep ur voice hidden and i can understand that but theres many alternatives to using AI. hire some dude on fiverr which is probably ur best bet to getting something professional. get a friend to do it. theres even sites like https://www.castingcall.club/find_jobs where u can make a thread and people will do it for free

[pearl pollen]

I'm so thankful for that advice dude

I wanna keep my voice kinda private that's why I use ai I'm not lazy btw

I'll go on that website you showed me and if this video doesn't perform well I'll change the ai voice to a real one

thank you so much