#Failing to impress, something is wrong with this video (thumbnail, title, and video feedback needed)

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dusky ferry
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This is a video game essay that discusses how Marshall mcluhan's ideas can explain the types of video games we have today.

This video is doing horribly, I can't get anyone to watch it. Is there anything in the tile or thumbnail I can change?

additionally could I get some feed back on the video, is the audio okay, what else can I improve? I am considering deleting it and trying again.
https://youtu.be/1C3pDcOOJrs

Edit: it's supposed to be "hot and cool" not "hot and cold" sorry about that

What makes a game truly memorable? Is it the perfectly scripted story that takes you on an emotional ride, or the freedom to carve your own path? In this video, we explore the fascinating spectrum of game design—from immersive thrillers like The Last of Us to the spraw...

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vocal owl
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If I had to guess, it might be because it's a concept that people aren't necessarily aware of and doesn't sound intriguing enough to make them click. I've never heard of Marshall McLuhan or his Hot/Cold theory, and the title+thumbnail doesn't really convince me that there's any reason for me to want to find out about it

nimble haven