Need opinion on this thumbnail

[tawny sierra]

Hello people
i need opinions on my new thumbnail, all opinions and ideas are welcome
thank you

here is another version

[icy finch]

I like version 1 more than 2. I have a small issue with the look of the "ece" in deception. The font doesn't do a great job of clearly imaging the middle piece of the "e". It's not a huge deal tho.

[frail willow]

i'd make the font a little brighter as it's difficult to see with the brightness down

[tawny sierra]

thank you both for your insighght i'll make the writing bigger

[tawny sierra]

the writing is a png image that i seperated, any suggestions on how i might improve that?

[icy finch]

lol, nope

[tawny sierra]

haha

thanks regardless, i'll look on how to make it better

[icy finch]

I'm booty sweat with that stuff

[tawny sierra]

lol now in the editing process

got to make a 47 min video into 10 to 15 min

[icy finch]

let me know if you want to procrastinate and chat with me for a couple instead of editing😛

[tawny sierra]

almost done editing lol
i planned on uploading the video 4 hours ago hahaha
i am waaay behind

i am willing to chat anytime tho

[winged niche]

Is it about Disney? Because the D is giving Disney

[tawny sierra]

no it is a horror game i played, that is their font
but i do see the resemblance a little lol

[winged niche]

Okay ignore me then 🫣😅