Hey all, I just posted my 3rd video. It's titled - Why You Being Lazy Might Not Be Your Fault. It's a video essay on laziness and out fundamentally flawed way of approaching it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyIp7IdZqGk&t=21s&ab_channel=VERBOSE
#Uploaded my 3rd video and need some feedback.
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soft trench
Hey all, I just posted my 3rd video. It's titled - Why You Being Lazy Might Not ...
Your text need to line up better with what you are saying, it's hard to read something when you said it a second ago
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Ok hmm. I thought they were lined up. Would really appreciate it if you could give an example
Any other feedback?
(anything good 😊)
soft trench
As early as 20 seconds in you say lazy then it shows up a second later
When you start the first syllable of a word it needs to be put on the screen if you are doing subtitles
I think defining what you mean by the word laziness early in the video could help because you explain why our view is wrong without a clear cut definition
Is laziness simply not working at all, is it not working when you ought to be working, is it the desire to not work in general
Or something else entirely. It seems like we disagree on what the word means so it's hard for me to engage with what your saying.
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When you start the first syllable of a word it needs to be put on the screen if ...
Ooh
Right
Good point
Tysm for the feedback
soft trench
Of course
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Compared to my area you have a thick accent but accounting for that it's good
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The audio overall is a difficult thing for me to judge
soft trench
I like the pacing and subject matter
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Nice
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Compared to my area you have a thick accent but accounting for that it's good
It's like clear tho right?
soft trench
Like I said tho defining terms in a "laziness is defined as x" is helpful
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I'm not sure what to do about the accent
soft trench
It's like clear tho right?
Yes
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Like I said tho defining terms in a "laziness is defined as x" is helpful
Yep gotcha
soft trench
I'm not sure what to do about the accent
People fall in love with accents so just do your best to be clear and keep going
soft trench
Yep gotcha
Always assumed your audience is stupid and pull them along your train of thought
Not in a derogatory way but in a helpful way
Especially in philosophical things, agreement on definition is necessary for engament.
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Tysm for the feedback my guy
soft trench
The other thing to note is that you're new so don't let small views get you down
soft trench
Tysm for the feedback my guy
My pleasure
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The other thing to note is that you're new so don't let small views get you down
Absolutely
soft trench
It took me 6 months to really break 1k and I did it quickly
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It took me 6 months to really break 1k and I did it quickly
Congratulations. I know any growth is exponential
soft trench
Congratulations. I know any growth is exponential
So true
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I'm trying to post one a week but it's a doozie
soft trench
And don't be afraid to steal ideas and concepts, but never steal material
All ideas are built off of other ideas
I gtg for now, good luck
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Would you mind if I friend you and maybe you can give feedback on my upcoming stuff
Terribly difficult to get good feedback
soft trench
Sure
south turtle
Really nice thumbnail and title!