#Needing Constructive Criticism on Latest Video

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coral mountain
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Just released my latest video, and have been getting very positive feedback from my peers, despite it's current performance. This either means the video is genuinely good, and YouTube needs to catch on, or my friends are holding back.

All I ask is for y'all to be brutally honest. No mercy.

Granted, I will need to give it a few more days in case the algorithm delays to pick it up like it did for one of my other videos.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmYvT6I1x0g&t=4s

Thanks in advance 🙂

I spent way too much money on this project, and it took me way longer than it probably should have to make this video.

If you really want to support the channel, the best thing you can do is leave your feedback in the comments. Be harsh if you want to, I'm all for constructive criticism :)

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coral mountain
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Nevermind. I think I got everything sorted. YT picked it up and it's now my highest performing vid 🙂

fierce abyss
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Great stuff man, although to me, the title and thumbnail make it seem like a much shorter video, you kind of went for a combination of a build montage type, where the pay off would be finnishing the build, and then at the same time a story type, where the payoff would be getting back at your girlfriend, you start the girlfriend story but end the video like a montage story

jovial prairie
# coral mountain Just released my latest video, and have been getting very positive feedback from...

honestly keep this up man, I'm a creator with 1M subs and lead strategy for a lot of large creators, and I personally think this video is going to be at 100k in 3 months, just be patient with it. I think alot of it is perfect to the point where giving advice on it won't be helpful. I think what to work on is how to make the next video even better. I think keep up the "I built XYZ because my girlfriend thinks I'm weak" this is a great title format I haven't seen before and I think you could make unique to your branding. for future topics think of things to build that are "gigachad" energy, swords crossbows, re-inventing electricity, get crazy with it. The more outlandish you can make your idea, the more views you will get. Shoot me a DM if you have any questions, servers don't always notify me

coral mountain
# fierce abyss Great stuff man, although to me, the title and thumbnail make it seem like a muc...

It is part one out of 2 parts. Part two will continue the story, and provide resolution.

I do see what you mean though. And I already have plans for future videos that take this into account. Ideally, the video will provide the problem, show the content, then provide the resolution, or lack of resolution at the end. I've just been so overwhelmed with my own head that I start missing important details like this.

I appreciate the feedback!