FEEDBACK NEEDED URGENT

[calm spoke]

make the youtubers logo bigger

also lower the volume you're spiking

[harsh lantern]

I tried but that is -5 db

[rocky crown]

Immediate feedback: I think your speaking style is great, casual / approachable, definitely works for me (as a fellow gamer).

One small piece of feedback: I would probably** say the name** of the developer in the video -- Abodia -- so it doesn't feel like you added it in post. I might also say, "I've linked their Itch.IO in the description so check em' out" to show them some love.

I like the judge art / the holy sound effect, got a laugh. 😂

Great job! 👏

[harsh lantern]

thank you buddy

[calm spoke]

also would suggest turning off the LED

[harsh lantern]

Honestly i know the fix. I have a good mic but my room is too echoey to use it now and fixing that costs money i dont have so thats just my issue to deal with now

[harsh lantern]

Background? Think it would be better white or dark?

[calm spoke]

foam pads?

[harsh lantern]

yeah doing my room up would cost about 150 bucks all things considered

[calm spoke]

it doesnt need to be completely dark

[calm spoke]

womp womp

[harsh lantern]

cool. they can be dimmed as well. Thanks for the note

[calm spoke]

have a light on your face coming from an angle but make sure you dont blind yourself

i have a lamp right next to me that i turn towards the wall for reflecting light and gives a warm yellow glow

[harsh lantern]

thats what i tried to do as well but unfortunately i mounted my leds a little too close together and its gonna be a pain to fix

but i will try

As far as the content? any notes. Youve talked plenty but truthfully i want to know how the words themselves come across

[harsh lantern]

Found out i can just bend my mic back a ton and it gets rid of the peaking lol, thank you for making me think

[calm spoke]

np

also for talking in general there isnt much to say its good you get to the point it doesnt feel like you're reading a script or are sitting there looking like you have a poll up your ass( thats what i do) so its good

[harsh lantern]

You have a pole up your ass? yikes

jk but honestly... there was a script. i couldn't get my words together

just re recorded the intro with you guys' help. Thank you for your words

I will leave this open for a while for any new opinions people!! let me know what you think

[arctic solar]

What program do you use to record?

Only feedback I personally have would be going into the settings for the camera on whatever program you use and setting the exposure down just a bit. It'll get rid of the washed out look and make the video as a whole look a bit cleaner

[harsh lantern]

I look that way because I (like an idiot) was running an led to the left of me AND in front of me... unfortunately my webcam is less than optimal and i use just the preinstalled camera app to record. I did re-record with slightly less light but I did notice that color washing on replay

Hopefully just running less light will help that issue lol

[arctic solar]

Hey I hear you, I have a very shitty little webcam I use, but you can adjust the settings (almost) always either way

[harsh lantern]

I'll give that a shot. Appreciate your thought step dad

[arctic solar]

Second thought, lean FULLY into it and add an industrial flood light directly above your monitor

[harsh lantern]

I had one in my amazon cart but i was reconsidering!! Now you have given me the confidence to become totally unhinged thank you

[arctic solar]

https://www.amazon.com/Changing-Equivalent-Bluetooth-Floodlight-Waterproof/dp/B07TVMZ4D5/ref=asc_df_B07TVMZ4D5/?tag=hyprod-20&linkCode=df0&hvadid=693770001779&hvpos=&hvnetw=g&hvrand=18141336327953995200&hvpone=&hvptwo=&hvqmt=&hvdev=c&hvdvcmdl=&hvlocint=&hvlocphy=9191788&hvtargid=pla-814086305897&mcid=8cf77ce64d493580bd39eab417552b3e&gad_source=1&th=1

I actually use these for backlight sometimes and they're great

they are blinding though

[harsh lantern]

I use a two for $6 pack of puck lights but THEY ARE B R I G H T

[pulsar turret]

i use a elgato ring light and a razer kiyo, but yeah audio and lighting