#video number 3 rough draft

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modern stag
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this is my third ever video, i cant reshoot much of it but would appreciate any feedback on changes you think i should make before i release it. Spots to cut, pacing, let me know if you dislike or really like some of the jokes, if you have any ideas for additions even, I just cant reshoot some of the scenes because getting people together is hard. I may not add your changes if i don't agree or think its too hard, but i think it helps me get a grasp on what other people expect for my next videos even if i don't

Completely ignore the thumbnail as it's extremely temporary.

Thanks,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbtJi9U-LOA

keen latch
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Watching through right now. So far the biggest thing I've noticed is that the audio is really quiet in a lot of parts. But I'll get more specific once I'm done with the video

keen latch
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So aside from the audio being quiet I noticed there was only music playing in some parts of the video? Maybe you haven't finished adding it in yet, but I feel the video would benefit from having music/sound effects playing to match the tone as it jumps around during the video. The other two big things that stood out to me were the moments at 0:48 and 7:46. The first one just didn't have a lot of visual activity for almost a full minute. I'm not sure if it would be possible to make cuts to the podcast in between your reactions to the things they're saying, but some other visual to keep things moving during that part could help too. Just something to help with visual engagement. The second part about the sheared plastic piece just felt unnecessary and didn't really help with the flow of the video or add much value. Maybe if the disruption was funny or more visually crazy it would work. That or if you got the moment it broke on camera that could help by adding context to that part. Otherwise I felt the video would flow better without that that 26 second part and instead you go straight to the part about getting a soul for your toilet

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Just my two cents. Hope you find it helpful and if you have any clarifying questions just let me know

modern stag
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did you otherwise enjoy and think it was funny?

keen latch
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I think the concept and jokes on their own were enjoyable. Sometimes the pacing and how the story flowed felt a bit off but I don't really know how to suggest improvements there. Just bits of it felt off. I like the concept though

modern stag
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Thanks! I'm definitely gonna try to improve the podcast clip at the very least. Maybe play around with the pacing and see if I can get it to feel a little better.

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Really appreciate it

modern stag
keen latch
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I was yeah

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It was most of the video that was quiet

modern stag
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maybe i didnt fix all the channels so its only playing in one ear

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okay so just bump the audio of the whole thing

keen latch
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Maybe. If it sounded fine to you maybe it was just me, but I listen to other videos and streams with these settings and hear just fine

modern stag
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ill bump the audio, cant hurt haha