minecraft video feedback?

[frail crescent]

https://youtu.be/IlyIVXC0PbY

[solar plume]

Hi, I'm not a big minecraft video watcher so may I'm not the best to judge, but I was conformed with the quality of your video, I liked it. I would post it on youtube and watch for the next things:

1. the first 30 seconds may not make a hook. There are a lot of videos exactly like this, you should make some difference or something which makes the viewer curious.

2. there are parts where your english becomes hard to understand. If you have vierws and stats, you may look at the drops (exist points of viewers) and try to identify weak points.

[frail crescent]

could u give me example where my english gets hard to understand? I think i say things pretty clearly?

[frail crescent]

how much of the video did you watch?

will give me a idea of how engaging it is

[solar plume]

I watched the first 3-4 minutes. That was enough for me to say that quality is ok. In the couple of first minutes were parts which I did not understand but there yiu may say things which are minecraft relevant and therefore I dont understand those words.

So its my fault 🙂

Dont measure engagement on me because I wiuldnt click on it. I just watched it to give you feedback 😉

[frail crescent]

alright thanks for taking the time to leave feedback 👍

[solar plume]

You're wellcome!

[sharp grotto]

def a very good intro

[frail crescent]

in what ways is it good? some people say its too slow im not sure.

its just the intro is inspired by another video that did well in terms of views so im hesitant to change it

[sharp grotto]

I thought it got right to the point telling what u were doing well at fiarly catchy editing in first few seconds

[frail crescent]

alright thanks!