#video feedback

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fallen ocean
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Hi!
I’m looking for feedback on my latest video regarding

Editing style
How engaging is my tone?
Did you think the script was informative, explanatory?
Was the on screen elements and b roll useful / helpful / engaging?
Title & thumbnail

Do you think I should continue making videos in a similar style, as I have been doing it for a couple of months now and while they were getting lots of views initially it has significantly slowed down. Any advice on where I can go from here?

The Game Cities: Skylines REPLACED
https://youtu.be/ywXdEzmLIpo

YouTube
Ducklops
The Game Cities: Skylines REPLACED

In this video, we will explore SimCity, once the most popular city building simulator, now a project abandoned by EA and Maxis. We will explore SimCity at its peak, and delve into the 3 reasons I believe caused its demise.

CHAPTERS!
00:00 Intro
00:12 [1] Background
00:45 [2] SimCity At Its Peak
01:29 [3] Competition
02:35 Subscribe!
02:45 [4]...

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sour geyser
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just with the beginning I was engaged with the video

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the subtitling is rally well done

fallen ocean
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Thank you - I spend a really long time trying to perfect the intro with a LOT of help from my friends

sour geyser
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the call to action was really well done

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i think you should continue with this editing style

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good job man

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its ogod

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good

fallen ocean
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Thank you!

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I tried something different with the on screen like visual effects in this video- I used the push transition to make things a bit more fluid and professional.

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I appreciate you responding so quickly too! ❤️❤️

sour geyser
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np man, good luck out there

fallen ocean
sour geyser
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also u just got another subscriber my friedn

fallen ocean
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Same for you! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

mellow prawn
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Hey, so great video! Lots of excitement in your voice, and editing is top notch. Don't stop what you're doing.

  • Editing style - great, bit intense trying to read the text and watch all the visuals, so maybe try balance them out a bit?
  • How engaging is my tone? - very engaging
  • Did you think the script was informative, explanatory? -
    -Was the on screen elements and b roll useful / helpful / engaging? - biggest downside. You mentioned other games, but then it would be best to show them. Agreed with the mobile version being used as a negative, as it didn't really help drive your narrative, it was more like just background noise
  • Title & thumbnail - really good, but Simcity text could be bigger personally.