#No filter criticism for my video please

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snow fulcrum
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I'm sure there's hundreds of posts just like this but I am being completely serious when I ask for harsh criticism

I want to know what flaws my videos have and what I need to work on, if somethings just boring/not engaging/just straight not funny, please let me know because I want to improve, the same applies if you think something does well please lmk, I want 100% honest criticism on my video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jWJdmL9qwnI

Hi gamers, I was bored,

so I decided to look for new indie horror games to play, and I found Panicore.
(also when I say new I literally recorded this video the same day the game came out, not my fault editing hard :(

Panicore has a really fun gimmick where you try to escape a building with CO-OP proximity chat with your friends, while the m...

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wheat monolith
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Hello! I watched your vid and I have a list of pros and cons. Keep in mind, I’m a fairly casual gamer and it’s from my perspective.

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  • I would’ve gotten rid of the lobby shenanigans.
  • Make the thumbnail but with less words. “Panicore: But with Idiots” would be better imo.
  • As a casual gamer, it wasn’t clear what the objective of the game was immediately. It just seemed that you had to survive, but there were items and tasks involved. What tasks had to be done?
  • 19:53, the music was too loud and sudden.
  • Started to become redundant to me. If this was about 15 mins, it would’ve retained my attention more for me.
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Those are my cons, but here are my pros! Your editing was very impressive btw!

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  • The text animations and font were a fantastic choice! Comic sans complemented it perfectly in what you were shooting for.
  • The Santa emoji killed me at 7:17
  • 8:36-8:42 GREAT EDITING MAN
  • 13:31 lmaoooo
snow fulcrum
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I should have probably tried to reduce to length of the video tbh

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you've listed more cons than pros but if Im wondering if you think the video is bad or good?

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like if it was a scale of 1-10 what would be an honest rating

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Idm if its a low rating I just want to know if its more positive or negative

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ill still take all the feedback ofc and try work on it

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like reducing video length and what not

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also when you said the objective of the game wasnt clear, that wasnt because of a poor editing decision, the games just not very clear at all lol

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theres just items around and you just sorta figure it out from there

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but still I really appreciate the honest feedback, ill try work on it

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if you can give an honest rating of 1-10, and if you personally enjoyed the video, it would make my day (even if you rate it low and didnt like it lol)

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I just want honest feedback if its still entertaining with its flaws

wheat monolith
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Not a problem! I respect the desire to improve man! I listed more cons than pros because I was in the mindset of a critical eye, but the fact the pros brought me out of that mindset means it’s a good thing.

snow fulcrum
wheat monolith
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Keep in mind, I typically don’t watch or seek out many gameplay videos, so I’m not your target audience, but I’d give it a 6.5 out of ten. I think that if you had a better game to play (imo) it would’ve improved it, but you guys were essentially making chicken salad out of chicken crap (I mean that in a good way!)

snow fulcrum
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in hindsight

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if thats hows it spelt

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I can see what you mean about it getting repititive

wheat monolith
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Since I also incorporate humor in my vids and I feel that what you and your friend are also doing here, it really helps to watch comedians or podcast clips that appeal to you

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And no worries man! We’re all trying to improve here and I’m just giving my two cents, but what I love is that you can feel the authenticity of your vids which give it its own charm

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Not saying stealing jokes, but when I consume that content fairly often, some tendencies of those funny clips come out in my own voice overs if that makes sense

snow fulcrum
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my videos have to be authentic because I am awful at planning and script work 💀

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Idk if you can tell by my intros

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but I keep them short cus theyre just

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idk it feels off

wheat monolith
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Bro, I don’t even have a script for my vids either

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But, I’m a shorts creator. So also different ballpark

snow fulcrum
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fair enough

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but I'll keep working on my videos

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ill try keep them shorter if they get too repititive

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ty for the feedback, it rlly helped

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ive got my next video recorded already and I'll try use what I've learnt here

wheat monolith
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You’re on a good path man! Don’t get too bogged down by the feedback.

snow fulcrum
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tysm

snow fulcrum
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knowing what you do right and wrong in a video just makes better ones in the future

wheat monolith
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Oh absolutely! But the more you do, the better you get with anything really