#Feedback on Funny Moments Video

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hollow jackal
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Hello! I just would like some feedback on my newest funny moments video. Were the moments not funny enough? Was it too much editing? Too little? Anything helps! (~4 mins)
https://youtu.be/fuOF5ItqOnQ?si=eCI8JO1A8PzqkYnt

Today I share with you my funny moments with my duo Stunt in BattleBit. Hope you enjoy! This is my FIRST Funny Moments video, more will be coming soon! If you guys do enjoy please leave a like rating down below as it really helps me out. Thank you!

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unreal umbra
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Where do I start, intro feels weird. The subtitles feel generic. and the title is unclear to a general audience. The commentary just feels like typical gamer banter, there's nothing "funny" about it

smoky sedge
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Far too little editing imo, I tuned out at around 0:30 even though something happened on screen

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there's a lot of dead time that could be eliminated, it's also pretty quiet

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for subtitles, they do feel dated. They're very sovietwomble style, but he started AGES ago. Things need to feel a bit more crisp now.

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Think about where your viewers eyes are going be in each clip. If they're nowhere specific, then use a subtitle. if they're looking at something, either subtitle there or don't subtitle at all. In either case you need to think about how easy it is to read the subtitles

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in this video, the subtitles are in a location that frequently has text or your hotbar, making it a little hard to read. Additionally, they're very low down on the screen so viewers need to move their eyes more to read them

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this also applies to the intro card where the text is white on a greyscale background (not easy to read) and is super high on the screen

woven kestrel
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I thought the whole thing felt kina low energy and was moving pretty slow. Make sure you put the best moments first and I think an intro would be nice. Who are you? What are we doing here?
I think the moments were not funny enough. I think you'll need to find an angle that separates your funny moments from the 1000s of others doing the same thing.
I thought the editing was fine. Nothing amazing, but it got the job done and added to the experience. I think the real thing that would elevate this is creating funnier moments and coming up with something that will make you stand out.

unreal umbra
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@hollow jackal Who are your inspirations to make this type of content? Because you should replicate your style to be on the same level as them

hollow jackal
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Thank you so much for that honestly! It helped a lot

hollow jackal
woven kestrel
hollow jackal
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I fs will!

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smoky sedge
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For example look at how Smii7y, Fitz, and Marley have their subtitles

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they just feel a lot nicer

hollow jackal
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Go it! Thank you so much this will help so much!

unreal umbra
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What do you use to edit?

hollow jackal
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I use Filmora, should I move to davinci?

unreal umbra
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No but for the your subtitles. I recommend finding a particular font and using keyframes to create a pop in effect

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Watch my recent video to know what I mean https://youtu.be/xP9bQFgL0kU?si=zFDZRITusQqDUtqR

In today's video I played this game called Party Animals (it's similar to Gang Beasts) and it was a joy to play

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hollow jackal
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Gotcha! Thank you!

smoky sedge
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the pop in on those subtitles is really slow

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a quicker zoom in that goes further than you want it to, then a very quick zoom out to settle into the correct position is pretty standard