Feedback on Funny Moments Video

[hollow jackal]

Hello! I just would like some feedback on my newest funny moments video. Were the moments not funny enough? Was it too much editing? Too little? Anything helps! (~4 mins)
https://youtu.be/fuOF5ItqOnQ?si=eCI8JO1A8PzqkYnt

[unreal umbra]

Where do I start, intro feels weird. The subtitles feel generic. and the title is unclear to a general audience. The commentary just feels like typical gamer banter, there's nothing "funny" about it

[smoky sedge]

Far too little editing imo, I tuned out at around 0:30 even though something happened on screen

there's a lot of dead time that could be eliminated, it's also pretty quiet

for subtitles, they do feel dated. They're very sovietwomble style, but he started AGES ago. Things need to feel a bit more crisp now.

Think about where your viewers eyes are going be in each clip. If they're nowhere specific, then use a subtitle. if they're looking at something, either subtitle there or don't subtitle at all. In either case you need to think about how easy it is to read the subtitles

in this video, the subtitles are in a location that frequently has text or your hotbar, making it a little hard to read. Additionally, they're very low down on the screen so viewers need to move their eyes more to read them

this also applies to the intro card where the text is white on a greyscale background (not easy to read) and is super high on the screen

[woven kestrel]

I thought the whole thing felt kina low energy and was moving pretty slow. Make sure you put the best moments first and I think an intro would be nice. Who are you? What are we doing here?
I think the moments were not funny enough. I think you'll need to find an angle that separates your funny moments from the 1000s of others doing the same thing.
I thought the editing was fine. Nothing amazing, but it got the job done and added to the experience. I think the real thing that would elevate this is creating funnier moments and coming up with something that will make you stand out.

[unreal umbra]

@hollow jackal Who are your inspirations to make this type of content? Because you should replicate your style to be on the same level as them

[hollow jackal]

Thank you so much for that honestly! It helped a lot

[hollow jackal]

Honestly, Smitty is always my inspiration for funny moments but thats a great idea

[hollow jackal]

Thank you so much! ❤️

[woven kestrel]

If you ever want me to look at something else, just lmk.

[hollow jackal]

I fs will!

[hollow jackal]

I see how they remind you of his! I'm sorry but not neccessarily following the crisp? Do you maybe have an example video

[smoky sedge]

For example look at how Smii7y, Fitz, and Marley have their subtitles

they just feel a lot nicer

[hollow jackal]

Go it! Thank you so much this will help so much!

[unreal umbra]

What do you use to edit?

[hollow jackal]

I use Filmora, should I move to davinci?

[unreal umbra]

No but for the your subtitles. I recommend finding a particular font and using keyframes to create a pop in effect

Watch my recent video to know what I mean https://youtu.be/xP9bQFgL0kU?si=zFDZRITusQqDUtqR

[hollow jackal]

Gotcha! Thank you!

[smoky sedge]

just a note on these (ik it's not the right feedback area but it's still relevant)

the pop in on those subtitles is really slow

a quicker zoom in that goes further than you want it to, then a very quick zoom out to settle into the correct position is pretty standard