First video I’ve edited myself

[runic sundial]

https://youtu.be/PShELZ0emK8

Type of content: TUNIC game review

Main feedback requests:
Is the audio mixing okay for the background music + my voice?
Do I need to cut to new sections of footage more? Or is the 20-30sec sections of footage I’ve used for each part acceptable?
Do people like the thumbnail?

[brazen sage]

Hi I just watched your video. I was listening to it through my phone speaker and the voice to background music sounded okay. I think you definitely need to cut into new sections of footage more often especially if you're talking about a new point.

[runic sundial]

Thanks so much for the feedback on that, much appreciated!

[finite holly]

I think the way you tied the video cuts with your voice is amazing. Rather perfect. I would say that I feel the music could be slightly slightly higher but the general mix is nice. When talking in your mic you are creating plosives. you can reduce this moving the microphone away from your mouth. the air pushing into the diaphragm of the mic is what causes this issue. As far as the video. I liked the topic. It was intrigueing. You were very thorough with the details of the game; I think the title of the video is decent but not capturing enough. When I hear someone say something is "the best" I tend to personally ignore that as most people generalize. I would instead go with something like "Is this the best game for Puzzleseekers? or for (specific group of the people). Still though. Amazing video imo.

[runic sundial]

Thanks for the feedback too! I’ll definitely have to work better on the mic and title parts. Getting my voice to sound nice in OBS or Davinci Resolve has still been one of my biggest challenges 😅

[finite holly]

No problem I love giving feedback. As far as the voice just throw on an EQ and see what sounds best.

[runic sundial]

An EQ? 🤔

[finite holly]

Equalizer