#how does this thumbnail look

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long reef
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tell me how i can improve it

lost dawn
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i like this! i would just say maybe bring the text a lil more down?

long reef
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alright

vague blade
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Are you using photoshop?

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Idea for your tumbnail! ill send something to you in about 30 min

vague blade
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whiios

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whoops

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What do you think of the quick remix?

long reef
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looks nice

vague blade
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i noticed people like to put on the left side like a photo thats poping out, thats why I added bruz, I think it adds a bit more pop, I think your letters were cool, but alot of dark and quiet background, if im on my phone, screen is already small, so I wanted something to pop, but thats just my idea on how i would remix it

long reef
vague blade
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Its the first orc you recruit

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its the first capitan of the game

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So he has a goal of capturing every orc, and it starts with that guy

long reef
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oh you thinking of the second game

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yea

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sorry you had no way of know that

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my bad

vague blade
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Oh this was 1st gaem

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game?

long reef
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yea

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sorry

vague blade
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oooo

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that makes sense

long reef
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still i like thumbnails better with less stuff

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it's better for people on phones

vague blade
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Yeah true, Mines just a re-invision, my own style type of thing haha

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I think you can make the letters bolder though, and maybe have a kick

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I think with shadow of mordor, its a bit of a grey and dark theme, you could contrast that with a cool outerglow

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Maybe make a Red-VS Blue contrast, with your words

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beause LOTR has alot of red vs blue, good vs evil undertones

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Maybe do letters in LOTR ring format?

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nah, actually, would look too small

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IDK though haha, some ideas

idle epoch
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I think having something be the central focus of the thumbnail and fill up most of it is for the best. Too many things drawing your eyes away makes it hard for people's gaze to lock onto it and understand what's going on

long reef
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im just going to put the text in the center i guess

idle epoch
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Well the text in the first one is easier to read

long reef
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the other one was a suggestion

idle epoch
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ah I see

long reef
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how does the first one look

idle epoch
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I think it's good, but I'd move the text closer to the guy so you can take it all in at once

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if that makes sense

long reef
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alright

idle epoch
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also what will the title be?

long reef
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i have no idea

idle epoch
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...

long reef
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what would be a good idea for one

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well i have some what of a idea

idle epoch
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i have no idea about what the video is

long reef
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ok would "branding ever orc in shadow of mordor" be good

idle epoch
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The issue is the thumbnail becomes redundant

long reef
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ok

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wait

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"making a army of orcs in shadow of mordor "

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how about that

idle epoch
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That could work

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Is there a limit of how many you can brand?

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Or like a set list?

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As in is this like a challenge video?

long reef
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you can brand all of the captains/warchief's in the game

long reef
idle epoch
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hmm

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I guess the followup is how does this differentiate you from other shadow of mordor videos?

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If it's just something apart of the normal gameplay loop

long reef
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o

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wait

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i read that wrong

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i have never done a shadow of mordor video

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in fact this is for my first video on the channel

idle epoch
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no i meant other ppl's videos

long reef
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o

idle epoch
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Have you already recorded?

long reef
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yea i have no seen other people really do this

long reef
idle epoch
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Even so, you could try to spin it a different way

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such as "I used this underrated mechanic to dominate in shadow of mordor"

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that might be too long but

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"This is why branding is cracked"

long reef
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idk

idle epoch
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It's only clickbait if you don't deliver

long reef
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branding is kind of ass tho

idle epoch
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I have the same issue where I don't want to clickbait ppl

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well XD

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You could try the opposite

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"I tried brand only in shadow of mordor, it sucked"

long reef
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ok wait

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nvm

idle epoch
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the issue with waiting to do title and thumbnail last is that you can't make it lign up with your content easily

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if you do them first/have an idea in mind, you can make them sync up

long reef
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will do next time

idle epoch
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and clickbait w/o clickbaiting

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I'd go with your idea then and see how it does

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or

idle epoch
long reef
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that title reminds me to much of fortnite

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lmao

idle epoch
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"Branding is still garbage"

long reef
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idk

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i will see

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ig

idle epoch
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good luck

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Or hell

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"I branded every Orc, here's what happened"

long reef
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might do that

idle epoch
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and in the thumbnail

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it says shadow of mordor

long reef
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alright