#AVD not so good - Could I have some brutal and genuine feedback on what could be improved?

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tired steeple
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the music is a bit obnoxous imo and the angles on the goals aren't great. If you've ever seen the "x but they get increasingly more x" videos they already start with some crazy highlights and follow a theme while this feels more like a generic goals compilation at the start

the intro is also way too long i just wanted too see some crazy goals off rip

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for example

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i'd rather hear the hype comentarry and crowd pops than music

tired steeple
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for example the goal at 22 secconds cuts right after he makes it, you cam't see his teammates rudhing him, and bc of the music you don't hear the crowd or commentary afterwards

I would cut the intro alltogether like in the video with dunks

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by plugging in your video title i get this video. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_lN52VwrBo

off rip they set up the goal in question and likely even boosted the sound of the crowd/commentary to increase hype

Unforgettable, spectacular and best goals in football. Ronaldo, Messi, Neymar, Ronaldinho, Balotelli, Balle, Ibrahimovic and more in the video!

The Epic Hero - Epic Cinematic Music - https://youtu.be/6wMNM0BjJGM

C'mon guys subscribe!😍

▶ Play video
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building suspense

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then the goal and the reactions

tired steeple
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I def think you can improve it a lot

cobalt otter
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As in changing right after the goal is scored

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They also have an intro that lasts 10 second

tired steeple
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I tried to find a soccer one to compare it to

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I just grabed the #1 video after plugging in your title

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The intro was also setting up for the first goal, not a channel intro. The one they did after the first goal made me click off.

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But the basketball one I think is a better example

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I ended up watching it all before I remembered why I clicked it lol

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off rip they take like 12 secconds before getting to anything, then throw up something asking me to sub

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I think this is a better example from their channel

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If you look at their most popular videos, the vast majority of them are from 3-5 years ago

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I'm also not a soccer buff XD. I think the one undeniable improvement would be at least lowering the music

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or making it more mellow

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All the other popular football vids did have music but it wasn't loud and low-key did fit

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we also don't know the watch time on the videos sadly so we can only gleam so much

cobalt otter
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These guys are people I know most of them

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So I kinda know their AVDs

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But anyway yeah man appreciate the input

tired steeple
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Hopefully I was of some small assistance

cobalt otter
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Send me a video you want me to take alook at

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But I think its anime related? And I have no idea about that lol

tired steeple
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The one in my recent feedback thread, but yeah that's another issue XD. I'm SUPER deep in the anime rabbit hole

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so don't worry ab it if you aren't really into it. Though if you feel like there is something I could do to improve it anyways I'd love to hear

tired steeple
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sure, thanks