#Please Roast My Video

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honest moat
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I’m actively looking for feedback constructive criticism to help improve myself as an editor, entertainer, and content creator. I genuinely want brutal and honest feedback given so I learn from my mistakes to make my next video better.

Let me know the good, bad, and ugly about the video starting with the title, thumbnail, then the video itself.
https://youtu.be/OCbkIjhARYs

Plug & Play is easily one of the strangest games I've played by far and possibly ever.

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manic rapids
# honest moat I’m actively looking for feedback constructive criticism to help improve myself ...

My first thought, when you mentioned plug and play and brought the logo up it feels more like a wind/slap sound effect should be there over a squeak type noise... outside of that I actually dont have much criticism which maybe isnt helpful xD I just really enjoyed it, maybe I'd ask for a little more bass on your mic and a more expressive model since it feels very static at the moment, outside of that I honestly don't know what to criticise, keep doing what you're doing

honest moat
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And it does help! Anything and everything is appreciated!

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