I Finally Uploaded a Youtube Video After Years of Telling Myself I Would. How Did I Do?

[midnight nimbus]

This is my first ever Youtube video (apart from one short) so any feedback that you can offer would be greatly appreciated.

Specifically:

1. How do you rate the script for the video and what aspects of it could be improved in future?
2. How do you rate my performance and what could I do to improve?
3. How is the editing and pacing, and could that be improved?
4. Technical aspects- video and mic quality?

https://youtu.be/wqbu2CDNuuw

[tawny yacht]

I so sorry but I geniuly doildnt hear anything, the mic is so abd and for some reason compressed very low so your voice keeps clipping out

[midnight nimbus]

Do you know how I can fix that?

[pure wind]

better mic, if you have whats supposed to be a good mic then look up how you can make it sound better, itll probably involve changing mic levels in the mic settings, clicking an actual button on the actual microphone to change the type, or applying certain filters/noise concellation/limiters in an app like adobe audition or audacity