#Keeping It Engaging

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frigid prairie
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Hi everyone! It's been awhile since I've been active on the server, been in a combination of a creative rut, sadge, and overall just busy. I'm trying to get back to riding my content horse weekly, and figured this new video I made, where I adjusted my style to try and be a bit more engaging with my content and keep people's attention, would be a great place to do it!

Overall the biggest thing I'm trying to work on, is did this video keep your attention for more than 35 Seconds (current channel wide average is 34 so really shooting for the stars here)? If not, why? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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Totally not incredibly stupid and forgot to attach the link lol

median talon
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Well it kept my attention over 30 seconds cause I didn't know where the tale is going. I watched the whole video to give you watch time though so hear my impressions as somebody not interested in the topic
A) you need faster cuts and editing. Make it chaotic. Anime fans are ADHD people who can't keep their attention spam on something for more than 3 seconds (t. anime fan ) So make your voice over similar.
b)don't know your previous work but chose some better waifu.

c) you seem like a native speaker but you were still unintelligible to me due to the sound quality. Either get louder with more in character voiceover, or get a better mic. I don't know whats the issue tbh I'm not an expert.
D)jokes were ok but I'm sure you can do better. maybe i'm just not familiar with the source material. Sad to say but you are not cringy enough. I'm being serious. If you were balls to the wall cringe and obnoxious I would like this style of a video a lot more. But thats just me .

Now hope for some proper feedback from someone more interested in the source material than me

frigid prairie
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Copy that. Ty for the feedback!

median talon
# frigid prairie Copy that. Ty for the feedback!

if you have nothing to do you can watch my video to compare my level of cringe to yours lol. And your thumbnail is fine. I can see myself clicking on it if I was interested in the waifu. Can you work with hentai waifus on YT? Obviously editing around sex and nudity .

frigid prairie
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I actually have done something kinda like that before but I’m trying to not pigeonhole myself with content thats sitting on a dangerous line.

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Much apprecie on the thumbnail, they’re one of the few things I think I have a solid grasp on

frigid prairie
median talon
# frigid prairie I’ll check it out after my workout! Feel free to send me a link if you’ve got so...

dont want to clog your thread, you can find it in the recent feedback topic, asking about CTR.

What I was thinking, use miss Kitami from bible black and do the opposite. Why your waifu is the best or something. Then be super serious, submissive and make your avatar wear a suit. Act all unironic, praising her care for her students and willingness to help them with their frustrations or something being a school doctor. Mention everything you can think off without mentioning sex and her having a dick.

yes i'm bored